Wow. This was absolutely great. I was able to imagine it all like a movie in front of my eyes, the pain, the tradegy, the oddness. This was very thrilling, B5-like fic. And I got myself laugh like a maniac when I spotted the line 'look at the size of that thing...' SW in-jokes...

Good job! But can I nitpick? There was a little too much drama in it for a Buzz Lightyear fic. But I guess whatever you like.

Very good plot and story very good fight scenes and it is just plain gooooooooooooood

Goooooooooooooooooooood

oooooooh,nice.

Hehe, I liked that one. You're a great writer, keep it up!

Well, I'm working on reading this one, but right now I gotta go, so I'll read the rest later. I like it so far! Good job!

Absolutely wonderful. Good ending, too. I see you've referred to Kazimir's (that's the artist for the CV, ladies and gentlemen) drawing. Jolly good.

A bit short though, during the 3rd chapter. But then again, it would have dragged on if you'd made it longer. Question: are the Oid going to appear in any other of your Lightyear stories or are you going to post all the stories you've already gotten? (and he's got TONS, I've seen 'em)

Again, well done.

-Noah.

Woah! Cool! That was a great story! it kept me on the edge of my seat! Wonderful job!

Continue please! It's getting more and more exciting by the second! Please continue!

I've read the first chapter and got a chance to read the second. You got some gut write curse in your stories even if includes Star Command cartoons. It's very great so far. You got very good writing skills! Write some more of the stories like these!

Aha, Calvin's still at his writing antics I see. I thought it was especially effective with the font size decrease, I expect it'll be a new style for you. Very nice.

The story is progressing rather well, and I'm quite eager to read the rest. You've managed to end these first two chapters keeping the reader in suspense, which some people can't quite pull off correctly. Congrats.

Glad to see Malaysian writers doing well. Brings up a certain patriotic pride. Well, most of the time, anyway.

Ooo, good. This I like! I hope to see more!

Pretty good. A little too much techno-babble for my tastes, but pretty good. Also, I don't think Buzz and co. would use swear words, even mild ones.

What Mira said, very good. Cant wait for the next part. _