That is so sad!
Poor Marguerite and that stubborn Percy!
When and how will they ever get back to the way it was before?
Waiting to read more...please continue soon!

Ooh! Harsh. I feel like yelling GET ON WITH IT!
But a) that would ruin the plot (if there is one)
and b) Some of my family are in the room.
GOod writing. Keep at it!

Oh, please do update this soon! I'm really interested. Love the plot, and seriously - PLEASE update! Soon! My life... well, almost depends on it. Please?

Wow! It could use so work, but it's very good. I'm putting this in my favorites! Please continue, it's a very bad place to leave it since the story has much potential.

oh, how depressing! poor things, you torture them so. Sometimes your diction is too casual for the period; they would hardly use ok and sometimes the words in your sentences could be rearranged to give them a more formal sound. For example "he was surprisingly good" seems very casual and modern. You also seem to be mixing semi colons and commas, which seems small but really does change how the sentence reads.

Sublimely tasteful and your wonderful skills at keeping in character are gold. The diction and dilague was wonderful and I plead that you continue this fine work soon. You have my heart upon the edge and me and my friends who have been reading this wish not to wait to long.

This is really very good. I can't wait to see the rest of it. Keep up the good work and I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter.

Oh, this is such an awesome fic! You've captured the personalities of the characters beautifully. I can't wait to read chapter two.

YEAH!! An interesting SP fanfic! The amount of SP fics is severly lacking, and I hope that you will update often and soon to add to this interesting take on Orczy's novel.

Hm. Interesting. This story is quite good, though you have quite a few run- on sentances and you're missing some commas. A good beta- reader can check those pesky grammatical errors for you, so that it doesn't take away from the flow of the story. Take up nebulia's offer! She's quite good. (By the by, IC means 'in- character'. It's fanfic slang/ netspeak).

The plot in and of itself is very creative, and the characters well- written. (I always thought Louise was French, but you're free to write your own interpretation. ^^) Very good, and I hope you continue writing!

IC? Do you mean icy?

Please update soon. Percy and MArguerite were very IC, but you have soem grammar/punctuation errors. You're a wonderful writer, but I'll grammar-beta for you if you want.

Wow, I really like this! I can't wait to read more. Quick question: Even if he didn't find out that Armand was in league with the Scarlet Pimpernel, wouldn't Chauvelin still be in England? Embassador of the Republic of France/Cheif Agent of the Commity of Public Saftey/Relentless hound on the trail of the Scarlet Pimpernel and what not? Just curious. Write more!