Very interesting. I can't wait until I find out who the boss is. Update soon!

Pleas write more...please...pretty please with sugar on top?

that was so good. i so what to know what heero will do. will it be like duo and heero start to have a relationship. and all so trowa qnd quatras will start to have a relationship too. well that is what i think. i can not wait for the next update.

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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 20:12 EST

Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 10 of 10

Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10

Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10

Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10

Overall Rating: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:

I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to review everyone's stories! You see my Dad has been in the hospital and I had to stay with him..So needless to say when I went to read my mail today I had more than 21 updated stories..and some of them where from the same Author and some from author's I haven't herd from in a while witch was a wonderful surprise!So all this means I have to do a mass update and I'm sorry for that ..You see I'm so tired I only go two hours sleep last night so don't ask me what is keeping me going..Now this is my review..I have read everyone's stories yes I sat here and read them all ..And I really enjoyed them..And to all of you,You did a great job ,good writing,great story line ,good imagination...Please update again soon...I think on one of the stories I've read some one wanted a challenge uhmm ok I would like to see an 1x2x5 3x4 with Duo leaving for a year at the end of the 2nd war and showing up at the end of that year with a child about 3 mounts old. The child would be Duo's and it's mother died in child birth so now the pilots will live together and raise the child... While 1x2x5 get together ..Well it was just a thought for a challenge...I have to go and get some sleep ..I will leave you with this if you keep writing I'll keep reading and thank you all for such great stories...

I love this fic! Please don't give up on it!

This is getting really interesting. Keep it up.

I can't wait for more! It's really good!

It's really good so far! I hope you continue!

Wow that was great ..I just loved this chapter...The action was so cool ..Please update soon...

Liked that for a start. I could really imagine Heero snapping and Duo laughing in the end... Maybe you could put in scene dividers, though. Well, keep going.

Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 10 of 10

Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10

Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10

Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10

Overall Rating: 10 of 10

Comment/Review:

I just love this story ...Good form ,Good form please update again soon...