|Reviews for After the first kiss|
| bonjourmeadow 3/25/10 . chapter 1
Quite the book, eh?
Lovely, really. This fits their characters.
| Kokis 3/28/09 . chapter 1
This, my friend, goes straight into my favourites.
Absolutely amazing. Your language is so poetic, so beautiful. The feelings within them both is so... real and the pain is so tangible.
I love this, I really do.
| StarTrekObsessed 2/24/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Yummy. Good job! :)
| mckenziedrestire 7/31/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful, just beautiful
Peace out, Kenzie
| Morbid Maxwell 3/13/06 . chapter 1
This has been my favorite PZB fanfic. The style is much like hers (which makes this better) and the things Ghost wrote were Ghost like. It seemed a lot like something he might have said. I loved it, and I love Ghost and all of his angst-ness so...great work. I hope you get back into writing fics of these two. You did a fantastic job.
Morbid MaxwellDead boys don't always say no...
| Epithelial 10/8/05 . chapter 1
You are a fnatastic writer, it's making me mad. I think that this calls for a sequal, dont you?
| rain and leaves 5/22/05 . chapter 1
The jig is up, Miss Brite. I'm on to your little game and don't think I won't tell the authorities. It doesn't count as fanfiction if you're the author!
Seriously, excellent story. It reads so much like Lost Souls it's spooky.
| The Bard's Apprentice 5/17/05 . chapter 1
YEA! XD that was absolutely AWESOME! XD
one of my new favorites!
& good for u for ending it there. Beautifully done. _
| RavenShay 3/25/05 . chapter 1
i have two word for you
EVIL and ANGST
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT
love the plot
talking bout the end
noce START FOR A STORy
how could you be so cruel as tho have that be the end
or is it going to be the first chappy
before i am forced to take drastic measures
i don't know what measures but they will be drastic
| pcg 2/11/05 . chapter 1
This was brilliant. Oh wow. *Very* good. Um, yes. I'm rambling. Anyway: *very* excellent fic.
| squiggle-monkee 12/29/04 . chapter 1
M... a visual style similar to Brite's make this a very lovely, and thoroughly convincing sliver of fanfiction.
| GhostHelwig 12/7/04 . chapter 1
...that was beautiful. I wanted to cry for Ghost, & for Steve, too... It was such a believable scene, & so vivid & lovely & tragic, too... A wonderful fic. I hope you write more.
| Lillithrose 11/20/04 . chapter 1
Really really good! I love how it's coming so far! Keep working on it!
| Gh0st 11/11/04 . chapter 1
This leaves a really vivid image in my head of the whole situation. It's something I can most likely see Steve being like for a while after returning to Missing Mile.
It's also sorrowful too. I always seem to feel for Ghost with more ease than Steve, but you got a good balance between the two differing views and emotions here. I really liked it.
I hope you write more, I'd love to read. _