Quite the book, eh?

Lovely, really. This fits their characters.

This, my friend, goes straight into my favourites.

Absolutely amazing. Your language is so poetic, so beautiful. The feelings within them both is so... real and the pain is so tangible.

I love this, I really do.

Beautiful. Yummy. Good job! :)

Beautiful, just beautiful

Peace out, Kenzie

This has been my favorite PZB fanfic. The style is much like hers (which makes this better) and the things Ghost wrote were Ghost like. It seemed a lot like something he might have said. I loved it, and I love Ghost and all of his angst-ness so...great work. I hope you get back into writing fics of these two. You did a fantastic job.

Morbid MaxwellDead boys don't always say no...

You are a fnatastic writer, it's making me mad. I think that this calls for a sequal, dont you?

The jig is up, Miss Brite. I'm on to your little game and don't think I won't tell the authorities. It doesn't count as fanfiction if you're the author!

Seriously, excellent story. It reads so much like Lost Souls it's spooky.

YEA! XD that was absolutely AWESOME! XD

one of my new favorites!

& good for u for ending it there. Beautifully done. _

i have two word for you

EVIL and ANGST

HOW COULD YOU DO THAT

love the plot

talking bout the end

noce START FOR A STORy

how could you be so cruel as tho have that be the end

or is it going to be the first chappy

if so

UPDATE

before i am forced to take drastic measures

i don't know what measures but they will be drastic

This was brilliant. Oh wow. *Very* good. Um, yes. I'm rambling. Anyway: *very* excellent fic.

M... a visual style similar to Brite's make this a very lovely, and thoroughly convincing sliver of fanfiction.

...that was beautiful. I wanted to cry for Ghost, & for Steve, too... It was such a believable scene, & so vivid & lovely & tragic, too... A wonderful fic. I hope you write more.

Really really good! I love how it's coming so far! Keep working on it!

This leaves a really vivid image in my head of the whole situation. It's something I can most likely see Steve being like for a while after returning to Missing Mile.

It's also sorrowful too. I always seem to feel for Ghost with more ease than Steve, but you got a good balance between the two differing views and emotions here. I really liked it.

I hope you write more, I'd love to read. _