LOVE THIS STORY! WRITE MORE TO IT PLEASE!

Hey, just wanted to drop you a quick note. I'm really enjoying your story, but there's a couple of things I felt should be pointed out as they tend to distract from the story. At least for me, they do. :-)

Anyway, it's things like "starred" instead of "stared", "winched" instead of "winced", and "shined" instead of "shone."

I really enjoy reading "On the Line". Though I want Keiko and Yusuke to kiss. Once or twice because the way you describe how they felt for each other but couldn't. Whenever I thought they were about to kiss. The word "baka" (idiot) come to place. I guess I really want to them kiss. That alright. I like the story a lot. Thank you _

Wow that was an awesome story and absolutely perfect ending.Great job.

I'd missed the ending of the fic somehow - I liked how you didn't have everything A-okay so soon... Keiko being a bit down was very natural, and Yuusuke's snowball fight was very much in character. XD Great fic! :)

YEA! that was a really good story! perfect job!

I was pleasantly surprised by the style of your ending: Most people have very happy and sugary endings, but yours kept the somewhat dark undertone of the whole story. I really liked it.

I hope you write another Yusuke/Keiko story soon: You're a great writer.

Wow Yusuke got Keiko to laugh talk again go Yusuke great ending to a great story add a squeal add more now now and hurry thanks jessica

nice one i especially like the part when Yusuke teaches that creep, Yamato Miyazaki a lesson of what happens when you mess with Yusuke Urameshi's friends, especially his girlfriend.

aww cute! can't wait for the epilouge!

WOW that was so awesome Keiko stopping Yusuke from killing that man who kidnapped Keiko sure definiently add a eqiloge add it now thanks jessica

Wow... just wow, that was spectacular.

The atmosphere felt so real, I felt as if I was an eyewitness watching as each scene unfolds.

Definitely one of the best I've read. And YES, I AM dying for a sequel! I want to know how they deal with it in the future and of course how these unfortunate events strengthen their relationship.

Cheers!

-squeals- That was the cutest no-kiss Yusuke/Keiko fluff I've ever read! His thoughts were so well-written and everyone was in character. I'm waiting patiently for the epilogue...

i love ur fic!im a big yusuke and keiko fan

OMG that fanfic is SOO good! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE update SOON! I LOVE IT! THIS IS THE BEST! (continues rambling on about how great this fic is and how much of a genius you are for getting the idea and how talented you are to write it this good.)Oh yeah, UPDATE SOON!