Well you're writing is defenitly NOT crap!! and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I really enjoyed reading your story!

love,
Jo

great story!
really enjoyed Harrys complicated desire of being independant but yet he needs help so much...
I don't think Snape was much OOC - it' s just another side of him, to care about someone...
Beautiful fanfic - I'm impressed by your writing skills!
greetings from Germany, Ulli

Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed it very much. I found it on someone elses "Favorites" list and it was well worth the read. Very unique ideas and I've read hundreds. I hope you are still inspired to write, I think you have talent...and I'm sure your writing isn't crap. It's going in my "Keeper" file on Explorer. :)

I enjoyed your story a lot.

Excellent!! Well done!!

Not too sappy at all. Very well done.

Excellent chapter!

Good chapter.

That is Severus Snape alright moreover Severus knows it may cost him his life. He rather expects it too.

Oh excellent! Nice chapter.

Poor Harry!

I was wondering if maybe Harry might like a Stag, a Lily and a Wolf as well.

Excellent chapter!

This Occlusion isn't the way it is supposed to be.

Give Harry some room to breathe! If all you do is chase him he has o time to think.