PLEASE write more soon!!

OK...Were is the rest! You have got my attrntion and now I want to see it finished.

Please to continue this...

Looking foward to this story, hopefully after u finish People's Prince and Ascension

Oh, come on. You can't just leave us there! PLEASE? *whimpers at the lack of the rest of the story*
Seriously, this is a very intreguing opening and I want to see where you take it.
-- Magefire

FINISH POR FAVOR!!!???

Wow. Excellent. You really should continue.

Continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... ^_^ It's soooooo good!

I am about to go into a state of absolute panic!!! when do we see the continuation????? PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSEEEEEE you have just got to finish this story and fast!!

I was going back through the pages on Fan Fiction.net & I found your story to be plausible and a great start to what I hope will be a good epic!
Keep on writing!

wow.....WOW!!! gosh, that was AWESOME!! ^_^ you absolutely HAVE to continue!!!! geez, this was writen SOOOOOO well!!!! ^_^ continue continue continue ^_^

Excellent. Vivid descriptions of emotional states is a skill that many authors (including me lol) lack. Those who can do that are talented indeed.

*sniff* so SAD! I wish I could write like you!

good story look forward to the next part, keep it up =)

Very nice. Very nice. Ummm... Very nice. This has left me at a loss for words. Which is not something that's easy to do. I hope it continues into a good story. Actually, right more or I'll sick my pet dragon on you. Peace.

That's beautiful...I think Ayeka and ryoko could be great friends...they understand each other in this Fic, well! Please write more, u'r work is fantastic! ;o)