nice story

I have to say that I greatly enjoyed this story. It is so very hard to find a Harry/Narcissa story that is not slavery or simply sex. This story was a little short and I did become tired of the constant flashbacks, but it was very good overall.
My only suggestions would be to tell the story completely without or with only one to two flashbacks. This would allow you to lengthen the story, which is also something I would like to see if you attempt this ship again, as it is one of my favorites.
Good luck and thank you for writing.

Perfect in every aspect.

Hello! That was an incredibly sweet story. I'm glad everything worked out for Harry in the end. I probably wouldn't have been able to keep living. I'm glad Narcissa finally gave into him though. I liked the way you used passed and present. It made for a really interesting story!

you should write another story with this pairing or harry/older woman

Cool its always nice to see a rare pairing...

good chap

good fic...

This is an amazing story. I mean i had seen it before but decided not to read it. I am saddened that it is the only Harry/Narcissa story out there. But i love the way that you did it. Simply amazing.

good story so keep writing its great.

cant wait to see what happens

wow that was really good

I loved that fic, even though it's against my usual preferences in multiple ways. The way Luna was present as a character was also especially effective. Thanks for the good read!

i like it

I really enjoyed this story. Using the memory flashes was an ingenious method of story telling. Thank you.