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CornflowerBlue
2009-10-19 . chapter 5
I'm burning with curiosity. I really want to know what happens next. I see that the last update was already about 3 years ago...is this going to be updated any time soon? Oh, please update this.
CornflowerBlue
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Aww! That's sweet, he didn't kill his son (though he is a runt). Sesshou is softening and it's expected. Love it. :D
bitty91
2009-08-27 . chapter 5
this story is great! are you ever going to update it?
Rose Garden
2009-04-10 . chapter 5
i adore this story and im hoping ur'll update even tho...its been a long time since u have

u said u wont leave this story...
Silver-ShadowSpark
2008-08-28 . chapter 5
I don't know if asking you to update this is a lost cause or not, so I'm going to. I really like this story. I don't usually care for Sess/Rin fics, but your's is an exception. So please update it.

Spark
syasya92
2008-07-10 . chapter 5
hey..uhh...pls pls update! The story is great! PLs...dun leave it halfway like that! Its too cruel of u! =p
arford21
2008-01-05 . chapter 5
Please write more. Would love to see what happens.
foxeran
2007-07-31 . chapter 5
I only recently began reading this pairing and this fandom, but frankly, this story is amazing. Your plot is interesting and engaging. One thing that I really think is wonderful is your OCs. They seem fully developed, real characters with their own personalities. This is really wonderful because I've seen stories where the second generation of kids are all very similar, cookie-cutter characters. I love your characterization of all the canon characters, too, especially your Sesshoumaru. He's so wonderfully true to his character and it's so believable. I can't wait to see more, and I really hope that you continue with this story!
darklover
2007-03-02 . chapter 5
This story is great so far and I can't wait to read more. I love how the kids are involved. I also love how Sess/Rin's first born was a daughter.
elaine
2007-02-24 . chapter 5
I really love your writing- particularly the characterisation. I hope you're going to write more cuz I so want to find out what happens!
BlackMoonWhite
2007-01-27 . chapter 5
-gasp- EEVIL men! Attack, kitty of doom! ...in other words, Kirara. Although 25 to 4 (even if they are demons) is a little bit much. I hope they don't do anything drastic.

Hm. No, I don't mind your original characters. My favourite is Kichi-chan, he's just soo cute! -glomps- And Emi and Akio aren't bad either - and I normally hate OC's! The character development for Emi and Kichiro is good, but Akio is a little neglected. I know he's only been around for 2 chapters here, but his personality and character dims slightly in comparison to Emi and Kichi.

UPDATE SOON please!
BlackMoonWhite
2007-01-27 . chapter 4
Oh Noes! Great Heavens Above! What's gonna happen now?! Sess nor Inu are dead. NOWAY. There IS a happy ending, right?! Yes, of course there is! -I am firmly in the rut of denial, and nothing can drag me out!

Checkers: ...Isn't the first step to truth accepting your denial?

NO!
BlackMoonWhite
2007-01-27 . chapter 3
NO!! A CLIFFY!! WHY?!?! D:
Must...read...more...but for your sake, I'll remember to click 'Submit Review' this time... Oh, Kichiro is so adorable! I can see great things coming from him, I just know it! Emi is a nice sibling, a lot like Sess, but kinder. (And Kichi-chan is like Inuyasha!)
BlackMoonWhite
2007-01-27 . chapter 2
Rin soothes him! Aw. And I really liked the dream sequence! It was really well done! Might've been the fact that even in his pride, Sesshy still saves a thought for Rin and thier kids. Even a panicked thought too! Hahah. xD;

Oh. I was wrong about their being more than one child other than the oldest. Meh. I hope it doesn't affect you - my mind works in a funny, simple way like that. Anyways, back I go to the story! :D
BlackMoonWhite
2007-01-27 . chapter 1
O.O ...-blinkblink-... O.o

Wow. I'm pretty sure I've said this before, but I really like how you write scenes that don't tell us /all/ the details, but leaves us with 'impressions' that help us fill in the gaps.
Like...when you say 'oldest', I get the impression there are more kids, even if only one is introduced here. I'm a little disappointed that Sess still seems as cold as ever, but I suppose I shouldn't have expected too much. He didn't change at all during the 7 or so 'travelling years' with little Rin, so what does 5 more make? And besides, it's fun to read about him being all cold and cruel - it makes all those flashes of kindness all the more enjoyable. :D
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