Oh gosh, i'm so hoping you start to write this again as its bl**dy fantastic! Please don't leave it!

Lionel seems concerne or even threatened by Serena in some way and what kind of connection did Serena have with Lillian/? Was Bruce right about Lex only pretending to care about Serena oe does he relly care about her? I hope he does I'm enjoying their complicated relationship...i hope ther is a happi ending.

That was very irrational of Lionel to reveal what Lex's mother did to Julian but i wonder if Serena already knew what had happened and in fact told John when she was kidnapped?

I loved the way you revealed more of Bruce Wayne, I've been waiting for that for awhile. Please update soon and continue this great story...

Good story so far! Update

Love it,Love it,Love it! Want more soon.

interesting story line.. can't wait for more

Excellent story... very true to the established characters, and you've rounded it off nicely with the introduction of the new character and the mention of Bruce Wayne. I hope you'll supply a bt of a peek at Bruce Wayne's life as well as continuing this GREAT story. I look forward to reading more.

This is a great start, I can't wait to see why Lionel is not happy about Lex and Serena meeting again. Please continue

I LOVE it! Right mor soon.

I love the fact you mention bruce wayne who and up being batman and Clark is superman they having secret identy.

This story is really good. I wonder why Lionel is being such an ** about Lex and Serena? What kind of relationship does Serena actually have with Bruce? Will Bruce being showing up in later chapters? You have to continue and update real soon. I can't wait to read more.