Hi there. I know it's been a long time, since you've updated this story, but, I do hope you plan on finishing it, or, at least letting me in on what Brennen, and Jesse are hiding. It's driving me insane. I do have some ideas, but I'm sure, yours is a thousand times greater, then anything I cauld possibly come up with. Thank You.

*clears throat*

ahem...

u know wat?

i read this story all e way from e 1st chapter till the 6th
(like for the uptenth time coz i 4got) n it still captivates me...
n after all these Y-E-A-R-S...(hint,hint)

well...i hope everything's alright in ur life...*crosses fingers*

coz i really would want an update...*grins*

i'm curious!
*starts to pout n whine* n i don like being kept in the dark...plus; i've endured it for so long!

*puts on her best forlorn puppy face*

so...if ur reading this...please give me a hint...k?

great story,please continue soon. the story line is great and i can't wait to find out what happens
c x x

You're going to update this story soon, aren't you?
Today seems to be my write-all-the-reviews-for-your-favourite-stories day and when I stumbled over yours and took notice of your last update-date I just couldn't believe it, that so much time has already passed.
And I so wanna know what's happening with Jesse!

Great story.When are you going to update.Really want to know what happens to Jesse.

I really like the story!

Can u hurry up and finish it though?

i really cant wait for more, i hope you update soon

WOW, fantastic you are updating! I can't tell you how happy this makes me! Every time I looked at new chapters on fanfic I hoped yours would be there, because your story just didn't leave my mind, it is so intriguing, I have to know what is going on!

When I red it the first time, I was really ** it didn't end, hell it made me so curious! It is such a fantastic beginning, I just love it! I think I need a dictonary, because I seem to have some trouble to find the right words for what I felt when I red your story! ( And that happens not often, I can tell you that much!)

So, here is a new chapter, with only more questions, but that is probably your goal, isn't it! (Hey, don't you laugh evil at me!)

Okay, you gave us a little answer, but also a new question! So, what's that mark on Jesse's back, what happend to him? (You see, I think you are enchanting me with this story, normally I am not interested in Jesse and now my first question is about him! Ah, what are you doing to me! First I can't speek and now I can't think straight anymore, MAM HELP!)

Well, Bren is really trying hard to keep it cool, but I have this feeling, Adam and Jesse don't believe his story at all! No, they are acting very suspicious! Yeah, why else would they visit him and keep prodding him about how he feels! (He is a big guy, he can take care of himself! Ah, or I can take care of him! Hahahahahaha!)

I really love your description of the conversation and Jesse's observation of Bren is really fantastic!

So now update, I can't stand this much excitement,it's not good for my blood pressure! Well you see, hurry because my life depends on it, I think a need a doctor or a new chapter! (HIhihi, I am really having fun! LOL!) But I am dead serious UPDATE!

Hey! I am glad you plan to finish. There seems to be a lot of stories that i would like to read that arent being finished. You are a good writer, keep it up! Cant wait for the next chapter!!P.S. I have msn you you would like to chat, although temporarely out of order right now:(

~Cassidy

whoa whoa whoa...you've got to be kidding me...all that and you leave us with a cliffy...you've got to update soon or i'll be left to wonder forever about what is going on with poor jesse...

WOW!! I totally did not expect this update. Its been way too long. I hope you're gonna stick with it and finish it...SOON! I love your story, I cant wait to read more. I love how your chapters tell you just enough but don't say too much...it keeps me on the edge to where i CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE AGAIN!!

more. really want more. more would be great. much more. please?

Hey! I wanted to say that I just found this story and I'm enjoying it very much! And I love Brennan and Jesse and the whole gang so I can't wait to read more. One thing confuses me that I'm hoping someone can help me out with. One of the other reviewers commented that Brennan was acting selfish. I've read threw it again and I've got to say I just don't see it. He doesn't seem selfish to me at all. Am I missing something?

Me like. Me want more.

I love your story so far, I just wish you would post more often.