THAT WAS THE END!?!?! :( aww's it was pretty sad, but over all it was a good story :D

It rocked my socks! Heehee. Oh, sure you can use Cel if ya want to. I don't mind. Yeah, the whole evil side, I love it. The Triamond plays a more important role in part two of AWOHAW. Anyway, good story, and keep up the good work.
This is Celestial the Hedgird signing off! ^_~

Man is my computer screwed up. I need to get a new one. Anyways, i read the chapter and my computer froze when i did. Hopefully this one will make it.

Kayla's end was not surprising, yet she is not used up completely in this story so i think that she'll be in a newer one.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Golbez: ^^
Mascara: O.o DUDE! She got frozeded!
Dark: What would happen if mascara got frozen?
Mascara: Im a witch I can only be burned so there :P

Wow! This is a funny chapter. The 'storm fight' was hillarious. And i actually liked the Eggman aka Ovelman here.

Continue, stage right.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Great going. Eggman's ship surely got it. But Cheese is a female. It says so in Sonic X. There is a spellckeck in the quick edit you can use. I can help you get an office too if you want.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Pretty good so far! Chapter three hasn't shown up on my computer yet, and I have to leave for school soon...but I still think you should update! Obviously, seeing as I own what people like to call "Mary-Sues" I don't mind them in the slightest. Keep it going! Now if you'll excuse me I must leave so I can catch my bus! Oh, and if you're wondering why I haven't updated anything for a while, it's cuz I got banned! AGAIN! I think it's the...12-15 time? Not sure anymore. Lost count! ^_^; I'll update Thursday though! Yeah, I added romance (Shad/Amy of course!) to Project: YinYang! I'm so happy!
This is Celestial the Hedgird, total Mary-Sue maker, signing off! ^_~

Golbez: (Smart ** face)
Dark: What the?
Golbez: Guess what I noticed...
Dark: O.o Oh no your not really a girl are you?
Golbez: O.- umm no BUT I noticed that Kayla has the same powers as Mascara! HAHAHAHA
Mascara: O.o Umm well I can explain!
Golbez: ADMIT IT YOU STOLE HER MAGIC BOOK!
Mascara: Huh? oh that eh... I thought you ment what I did to you last night.
Dark: What the HELL!
Golbez: I agree! O.o
Mascara: ^^

o she can strike lightning! thats cool.

Golbez: No... I wouldn't FLAME! you FLAMING is mean and inconcideret. i mean... HOLY CRAP THAT STORY SUCKS!
*FLAME!*
*FLAME!*
*FLAME!*
*FLAME!*
(Not really happening!)

I have a hunch, no! I'm sure that you're a feminist. Lollies. ^^ That was awesome! The cute little mouse (aw) can stand up for herself and other girls. I like that. I don't know who could flame a story with such a great plot.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

O.o
dude... she has magic powers and stuff... o