OMG I loved it! This was truly amazing... a sequel would be nice... :)

I also loved the Buffy references too. Buffy, the Chipmunks, and vampires... what more could you possibly need in one story!

There should be a Alvin and the Chipmunks meet the Mummy as Sequel to Alvin and the Chipmunks meet Dracula. In Alvin and the Chipmunks meet Mummy Alvin be come a Mummy & Dr Frankenstein return and for revenge for Chipmunks also getting Alvin again & the Chipettes are init.

wait when did alvin turn into a monster?

Why does my story end up with biting Brittany? Weird

i loved it!mostly cause simon suville is my faveroite chipmunk ever!mabye u could write a part where simon accedently bites jeanette and runs away ashamed of himself for hurting the girl he loves then dies infront of her in the sun light cause dracula was about to kill her but simon jumped in front of her in broad sunlight!but her tears or sorrow revive him and then dracula swipes simon out of the way with such a force that simon could die from the impact and you can make the rest sincerly,jeanette knight (yeah my name is jeanette,thats why shes one of my favirotes too)

i loved it!mostly cause simon is my favroite chipmunk ever!i love how woried alvin was for his big sibling!it was filled with depth,and suspence!it was an epic porportion of love and care.but you should add an sequal called...chipmunksDRACULA RETURN FOR SIMON!SIMON I LOVE YOU!YOU R A AWSOME STORY WRITER LOVE&PEACE:)

I loved it. it gave a ton of suspense. my fav chipmunk is simon. i was so happy when he returned to normal! i really loved it!

LOL! I can't wait to read your next Chipmunk story!

Aw in a way I really didn't want Dracula to die... I mean, Dracula just wanted a family after all.

*There was a pause as Dracula released him. “I had three daughters once. They were taken from me before their time. I do not relish the idea of eternity alone.” He looked at Simon oddly. “Perhaps, I won’t have to. Perhaps I should consider three sons, instead.”* Hm Simon and Theodore could fit the roles of daughters, but if Dracula is planning on making Alvin his son he really doesn’t know what he is asking for…

*His hair, instead of being in its usual style, was slightly darker and fell naturally into a stylish ‘do. His face seemed different somehow, and it wasn’t just the glasses...it seemed almost cold. And he looked...cool.* I keep picturing Simon to look like the main guy from “Grease” now…
*Dracula looked up from where he was, hissing at the chipmunk. Simon was in his arms, looking dazed.* Isn’t it usually the woman who Dracula takes? Hm I guess Simon could be considered the girl of the Chipmunk group, if you were to take out the female chipmunks that is… I’m not really making any sense am I?

This is a great story thus far! You really have a way about keeping the characters in-character and yet somehow still being able to make Simon different as well...

well DUH i'm interested
u better hurry up tho!

O what exactly happened to her? hopefully Simon will save her now. Cool story

Total sequel! I loved it! Totally going on my favs list!