Sounds pretty feasable to me. Though kidney patiens can live without dialysis with only part of a kidney for some time. (If you wan a more detailed explanation please e-mail me.) Also, Bright's first name is actually Harold. Brighton's his middle name. I'm fairly certain a doctor would call him Harold or just plain old Bright.

I liked it a lot it has a good plot to it! I hope you update soon!

hi! cool story please update soon.

Hmm, interesting.
I'm not very medically-equipped either so I don't know if that's possible. Go figure. I watch 11 years of ER and I still haven't caught on to medical terms. Hunh..
In any case, I like the premise of this story and I haven't been watching the show lately but I can definitely tell Bright gets ignored - a LOT.
Tell us who Donovan is and when he and Bright met. He seems nice.
~Kara

not bad.

o! please update soon! vair vair good! i really wanna read more! kidney failure? so sad! and i wanna know what happens! please, hurry with chappie two!