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Lil DragonLex
2008-07-15
ch 3,
abuseAw. That's so sad that Zelda doesn't remember Link. But Link is leaving! I hope that you would work on this story again. You left it at a bad time to stop!
Um...Stuff
2007-05-03
ch 3, anon.
abuseReally enjoyed reading the story. I know that this was posted years ago but it says its continued. I know u will probably never see this comment but, I do wish you would write a continuation. Uh...I hope Zelda gets her memory back(the story is sad without her knowing). Great job, i think im done.maybee.wait,yeah i am.
Pint of Stella
2007-01-30
ch 3,
abuse!I LOVE YOU!

^_^ was that too forward? OK. Sorry.

Honestly, your stories are amazing. If you ever find the time to update again, please do! Believe it or not, you still have readers out there who want to see what's going to happen next. (I think if you typed one sentence I'd be ecstatic. :P)

You're definitely one of my favorite authors on this site.

Great job with the stories. Bravo!
Loo'd
2007-01-01
ch 3,
abuseYou are absolutely incredible in your writing. You paint a picture that's vivid without losing sight of character development, which is a rare thing. I just wish you'd update! It's been so long now... I'm adding this to my favourites, first of all because it deserves it, but second because I'd like to be able to know immedietly if it updates!!
Zeldanerd
2006-07-20
ch 3,
abuseThat was...so good. A really good story. I read it over and over again. But when you put continue at the end I assume that means that there will be more. So WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. Still, good story.

-UYF
Mystic Bohemian
2006-03-21
ch 3,
abuseYou have an intelligent, descriptive writing style. I'm like ur character development, it's very subtle. I know, i'm not making much sense, but i think ur captured the moment of the game between OoT and Majora's Mask in a believing way.

Good Job!
Corran Nackatori
2005-11-25
ch 3,
abuseWow. I love the way you flesh out the conversations we all (sadly) have memorized from playing the (beginning at least of the) games too many times.

Your characterization is lovely, and leaves me with a sort of wistfull loneliness at the end of each chapter. It's perfect. (the mood, I mean)
LeaD
2005-11-20
ch 3, anon.
abuseAmazing story, really, I hope you are writing chapters as you go and plan to just release a whole bunch at one point or really long ones, cause this story is great, I just hope you can update it soon. Please continue the story, even for the lack of reviews, people will eventually see this and read it as one of the best stories they've ever read on L/Z or maybe any fanfic if you continue at this rate with this amazing writing.
Sirael Lythling
2005-10-01
ch 3, anon.
abusePlease update soon! This story is so refreshing compared to other LZ fics.
WCS II
2005-08-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseAnd here we have yet another author that doesn't believe in keeping the supply up for demand created.

Even worse, the author promised to update after their finals, and well that was three months ago, so that means that they had at least two months free time. What happend?

Since there are several people here that are already members of the database, how about someone send the author an email? To motivate them, or... something.
Reiya-chan
2005-07-24
ch 2,
abuseupdate!
Sweetwater-Rhapsody
2005-06-24
ch 3,
abuseoh this was a great sequel to finale. i cant wait for the update!
ThatNateGuy
2005-06-09
ch 1,
abuseI see why Split was so enthusiastic about your literature. It is very well-written, and features some very good ideas.

Well done.
Vladimir the Hamster
2005-06-07
ch 3,
abuseOoh, this is nice! Good stuff. And I would like to say whistling on grass blades is the best thing in the world. My two cents.
Split Infinitive
2005-06-04
ch 3,
abuse> The smooth coolness of lavender-blue porcelain, a drop of frozen time within her cupped hands.

> A silent moment hung taut between them, as delicate as a spider's strand.

I wish I'd written those lines...

This is...I don't know, what's the word?...magical? Yeah, that'll do...you capture the magical atmosphere of the OoT game in a way that other authors don't even *attempt* to do (to the point that I wonder if they played the same game as I did).

The slow-burn of growing intimacy (I'm wordy like that, sorry!) between Link and Zelda is superb.

It's not often that I'd describe a Zelda fanfic as the 'BEST. FIC. EVAH!' but this is the first and only story I'm putting on my 'Favourite Stories' list.

Now it says 'continued' at the end here, but you haven't updated since Valentine's Day. Hope you haven't abandoned it.

Great job!

Peace,
Split
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