Amazing story, I love it! Very well written, doesn't feel like a fanfiction at all but a book or something and I have enjoyed every chapter inmensely. Hope you update soon ^-^ because I can't wait!!

Had to read the whole story again to remind myself where we were (no bad thing in itself)...

I like your characterization; everyone from Darunia to Impa to little Zelda come across as very distinct and individual. Zelda, in particular, seems suitably childlike and innocent here (though less formal than in previous chapters). You capture her wide-eyed wonder of the Gorons well.

Well, nice to see an update anyway! Still wondering where we're going plotwise, though. Have a feeling we won't find out for a long time yet!

One of the most poignant short stories I've ever read, and one of my ultimate favorites for the Legend of Zelda fandom. This story could technically stand alone as it is now (and has been for some time, apparently), but I really am curious to see where this story would lead to if given the chance.

Aw. That's so sad that Zelda doesn't remember Link. But Link is leaving! I hope that you would work on this story again. You left it at a bad time to stop!

Really enjoyed reading the story. I know that this was posted years ago but it says its continued. I know u will probably never see this comment but, I do wish you would write a continuation. Uh...I hope Zelda gets her memory back(the story is sad without her knowing). Great job, i think im done.maybee.wait,yeah i am.

!I LOVE YOU!

^_^ was that too forward? OK. Sorry.

Honestly, your stories are amazing. If you ever find the time to update again, please do! Believe it or not, you still have readers out there who want to see what's going to happen next. (I think if you typed one sentence I'd be ecstatic. :P)

You're definitely one of my favorite authors on this site.

Great job with the stories. Bravo!

You are absolutely incredible in your writing. You paint a picture that's vivid without losing sight of character development, which is a rare thing. I just wish you'd update! It's been so long now... I'm adding this to my favourites, first of all because it deserves it, but second because I'd like to be able to know immedietly if it updates!!

That was...so good. A really good story. I read it over and over again. But when you put continue at the end I assume that means that there will be more. So WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. Still, good story.

-UYF

You have an intelligent, descriptive writing style. I'm like ur character development, it's very subtle. I know, i'm not making much sense, but i think ur captured the moment of the game between OoT and Majora's Mask in a believing way.

Good Job!

Wow. I love the way you flesh out the conversations we all (sadly) have memorized from playing the (beginning at least of the) games too many times.

Your characterization is lovely, and leaves me with a sort of wistfull loneliness at the end of each chapter. It's perfect. (the mood, I mean)

Amazing story, really, I hope you are writing chapters as you go and plan to just release a whole bunch at one point or really long ones, cause this story is great, I just hope you can update it soon. Please continue the story, even for the lack of reviews, people will eventually see this and read it as one of the best stories they've ever read on L/Z or maybe any fanfic if you continue at this rate with this amazing writing.

Please update soon! This story is so refreshing compared to other LZ fics.

And here we have yet another author that doesn't believe in keeping the supply up for demand created.

Even worse, the author promised to update after their finals, and well that was three months ago, so that means that they had at least two months free time. What happend?

Since there are several people here that are already members of the database, how about someone send the author an email? To motivate them, or... something.

update!

oh this was a great sequel to finale. i cant wait for the update!