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| Nick 2005-06-06 ch 9, anon. | abuseexcellent! no other way to explain such a great fic. D/J forever. |
| sailor gurl.com 2005-02-19 ch 9,  | abuseAw! that was lovely ^_^ I loved this story |
| JM 2005-02-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseThat was a really nice ending. The wedding sounds great and it didn't go on and on. It was simple and sweet. Love it. Nice job. |
| JM 2005-02-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhat a great ending. I loved this fic and its prequel. I love the proposal and everyone watching. I hope we get an epilogue with the wedding and more with the kids. Love them! Hurry back with more of your writing! |
| sailor gurl.com 2005-02-06 ch 7, | abuseaw this was such a nice chapter! please update soon |
| JM 2005-02-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseNice chapter. I have to admit I was hoping DJ would have a bit of drama with the whole Gretchen thing. It's a big bomb to drop and I would have liked to see that play out a bit more. I hope we get the actual proposal too! I know you're cutting this short so hurry back with more DJ stuff, not so much PA! |
| sailor gurl.com 2005-01-20 ch 6, | abuseHey this was good ^_^ Please update soon |
| Shelz 2005-01-18 ch 6, | abuseWow!! Talk about a cliff hanger...all this on the eve of his proposal. Gotta say that the holidays are always pacted with emotion in Capeside! Great update! |
| JM 2005-01-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseI have to admit, I've very shocked about the relevations in Chapter 5. Very shocked. I get this bad feeling that D loved Gretchen more than Joey. Not that he's settling for her but still. When Joey finds out she'll freak and I don't doubt that'll threaten their future. And if I were her, after finding out this, I'm not sure what I would do. |
| JAS 2005-01-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseUh-oh, this is really getting sticky. I know I left you some feedback on FLH but I want to leave some more. I still can't believe Dawson and Gretchen and she was pregnant. Not to mention, how could he compare his feelings for Joey to even Gretchen. But what happens now, when Joey finds out especially when she originally thought she was replaceable, it's gonna break her heart. I just hope she is adult to accept it was a long time ago and that she was with Pacey also. Hurry up with more. |
| jeannette 2005-01-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseWonderfully written! I can't wait to read more of the story once you update it... it's going in a very interesting direction. |
| sailor gurl.com 2005-01-01 ch 4, | abuseHey this is good keep it up ^_^ Lou |
| etafeen 2004-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story, i love it! Please update soon. I hope that Gretchen does not get between Dawson and Joey, i would love to see a marriage there |
| jenny 2004-12-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseHmm, Gretchen is very out of her character. I hope this works for this story. Well, I'm looking forward to further chapters - the storyline has been good so far, your style of writing is as good as ever, just don't make the story too obvious and insert some unexpected stuff which is not covered by the one-sentence-summary. |
| jm 2004-12-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseyea! an update! great chapter, i love the family bonding moments and dawson not being an attractive sleeper. Love it! i'm curious what gretchen is going to do, especially if she doesn't care what happens to anyone else. hurry back with more! |