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| Spice of Life 2006-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was great! Poor Charlie, I love him so! |
| Ever1 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseFu-ck-ing hell. =| This is amazing. Definate faves. Just, ah, beautiful! "Jack pretends he didn't see the way Charlie's eyes lit up at the attention. He doesn't want to embarrass him. Jack feels like a bastard." "How could he have let this go on for so long? he asks himself. What was he doing wrong -- so wrong that Charlie started feeling worthless?" "Charlie plays a few chords aloud on his guitar, affection-starved but smiling." The prose of this is absolutely gorgeous...love the present tense. 'affection-starved but smiling'. Just gorgeous! =| =| =| |
| Adnawun 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Well written, and read smoothly. |
| Cera 2004-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse*smiles* Damn straight. |
| CharliesHoodie 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseThat's cool! ^.^ |
| Squrlie Jack 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseaww that was really good. |
| BabyGirl98 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseHey I liked your story, LOST is a great show. Let me know if you make more stories. This one actually had a visual |
| Lostand24fan 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. Can't wait for more. |