An overall awesome story! :D
The ending was pretty explosive, just how I like them! But poor Sirius... that made me sad :(
Your honestly a genius for the musical chapter, I may or may not draw the 'Hogwarts: The Musical' number as fanart in the future (if i can) and show you somehow... I don't have an account on here so I'm sorry you can't contact me back. I'll probably forget anyway, but just in case you get a review in the future with a link in it...you've been warned (don't worry I'll take it off whatever site if you want afterwards).
I like how you carried the plot through friendship, love, deep despair, humour...pretty much had everything! And I really noticed your writing in general improving as you went on :)
Okay, I'm gonna go read some more of your stuff now!
p.s. Yep, i do usually go this overboard with the reviewing...

Hogwarts: The Musical - GENIUS! When I started reading this chapter I thought it would be kind of cringey and song-fic-y, using the authors fave songs and all that...you know how it goes. But then *manic grin* I got to the second song and fell in love with you! Utterly brilliant! Your songs are actually properly written, good 'n' cheesy musical songs! And the unoriginal ones fit really well! Oh, what I wouldn't give to see this on film...

The last one was pretty heartbreaking though... Sirius... :(

"Don't forget me." "Don't come back."
Oh lawd, I'm tearing up over here! This is some dark stuff... It's gotta end happily though. Right? :'(

I love how Hermione wakes them all up every morning. It's very amusing and has endless possibilities... XD
And I find the fact that she dresses Ron and Harry (who you've written to be very funny)absolutely adorable!

I'm loving this fic so far, can't wait to read the rest :)
I've read some of your others too (which are also excellent) and would just like to let you know how refreshing the lack of girlyness there is in your writing. Not to be harsh on my own gender, but a lot of fanfiction gives me a headache because of it... ;)

that was so good!i'm sure you hear that alot, but this story was totally kick-rocking!

i vote hermione and sirius! but i can kinda tell by the pairing that it's hermione and remus...darn. oh well. love the story, by the way!

this story is painfully amazing.
it's so creative and well written, you blend the plot and the light-hearted fluffiness effortlessly and you always find the perfect balance between humour and seriousness.
and i ADORE your hermione.
i often read stories where she's the central character and she absolutely gives me the **, but the way you've written her... she's completely in character but you've given your own spin on her personality as well.
it's such a powerful story, i love it SO much.
just... GAH.
*is speechless.(despite the comment above lolol)*
excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent EXCELLENT work =D

and btw, the battle in chapter 18 was EPIC. :P

*sniff* oh i just love a happy ending *claps* this was a beautiful story full of action romance and suspense! i'm so glad i got to read your story!

well that was unfortuante she just knows thats awesome and well dangerous since she dosen't know how! well anywho on to the next chapter!

yay! i knew you wouldn't let hermione stay in that awefull place for a long time!

i beg to differ it clearly said..."she pulled him to her before the guard could act and kissed him quickly." but i know it wasn't in the romanic sense so i'm not really trippen but i thought i would be a smart ** and point that out to ya hope you don't mind ^_^! well on to the next chapter!

awe man harsh and bloody awefull well nothing elae i can really say except on to the next chapter...

awesome^^

I'm glad I finally found the drive to read this. :) It's been great.

There are a few parts where I'm left wondering, though. Some chapters, you skip events and problems unresolved. :) But it's alright.

I would have supported an SB/HG/RL relationship, but whatever.

Thank you so much. Keep writing. :)