This was another eally great story. Um again as usual im not sure i understood it completely, but in my opinion i thought it was really beautiful, i couldnt appreciate it more. the ending line im a little unsure about was he actually dead, i was only confused because the line "curled in a mass of scarlet against his body" might hav suggested blood or his hair, im not that good at analysing stories so you'll hav to forgive me. anyway it was a really amazing short story , very meaningful. plz write some more

OH MY GOD! T_T so sad! *sniffles*

AW! This is so beautiful and touching! I love it and yet... I kinda don't get it... (I love Bryan!)

I must say I enjoyed this one the most. Foremost because it took me longer to comprehend and find my own understanding to your words of beauty.

Yet I still have questions lingering; the last line of everything can be taken in so many ways. Though I presume you didn't mean he was really dead, just void of all emotions they were trying to feel.

I smiled at the line of bruises; still to my liking.