I love the alternate title "you got swept" shear genius.

Good very good can't think if anything wrong.

hey why won't you make it where Brandon is back as Grave and he is sent to her once agian, but what if she to becomes like Brandon. Make where she has suffer and tried to avange that persons death, but failed badly. Causing her to die wanting to avange the death with his aid and falls in love.

oh, I like. Thats the first thing I said after I read this. Anyway, your writing is FANTASTIC! LUVS AND HUGS!
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Awesome! I love the gritty atmosphere and the picture you paint of Brandon. If you dont mind my asking, I have a gungrave site at Would you like to submit your fic?