 Cheshire 2008-11-06 . chapter 1So, this made me want to throw up a little, but that just proves how well done it is. |
 ??? 2008-11-06 . chapter 1 Ugh...
Disgusting, yet wonderfully written.
Uh... well done ? :P |
 MatsuoNoRisu 2008-08-16 . chapter 1I was listening to Mein Teil when I saw this and ended up making a noise I didnt know I could make XD Ich leibe Rammstein fur immer! |
 jindouji 2008-04-22 . chapter 1What can I say?
You have done an excellent in job capturing the elements of the Silent Hill genre in all its horrific glory. Your writing is descriptive and imaginative (even though it made me feel slightly ill...) and the characters are very believable. I especially like your portrayal Walter, he is very much a boy in a mans’ body. Great Job! |
 M.A.D. 2007-06-10 . chapter 1 look at this, a Rammstein fan! you freakin rule, man... anyone who listens to Rammstein kicks **, and good story too... |
 MegFallow 2006-12-06 . chapter 1Great! I love it really! I felt so sorry for Henry and yet intrigued at the same time as to Walter feeding Henry his own umbilical cord. I loved how you described the roller coaster of emotions Henry had as he was being held captive in his own apartment by Walter. |
 PJ 2005-08-15 . chapter 1 I see that you're writing fanfiction again. And a sequel to Mein Teil too! You made my day! |
 PJ 2005-08-06 . chapter 1 WOW. Words cannot describe how great this story is.
Please. Write more. |
 Gaia Faye 2005-05-01 . chapter 1AHohmygodwhatthehell?!
Um... I mean... o_o Buh. Yes.
And now from the articulate part of my brain: This was very well written, and it freaked the hell out of me, in a good way. If there is a good way. Well, I suppose that was your intention, therefore it is good. I see from your profile that you're planning a sequel. Should be good also. My vocabulary is stunning.
(“You’re an insane person.” |
 Sonic19902 2005-02-26 . chapter 1Wow. Just wow. This fanfic was just plain amazing! The best one-shot I've ever read, possibly. I always wondered what had happened to Henry before that hole appeared in his wall, and I believe I want to apply this story to that.
It fits in perfectly, and I love how you transitioned from Henry's thoughts to when he was having Walter's memories. Your descriptions and explanations of how Henry's feeling were beautifully believable and extremely well-written.
As for errors and stuff, I haven't really noticed any. There were like 2 places where ya could have used a comma or something like that, but they're not really important. And I think most of the errors were intentional anyway. I can't really think of anything that could improve this either, and I suppose that's a good thing.
Dun know what else there is to say, but it makes me almost wish that Silent Hill 4 was a book instead of a game. **' awesome job! I'm adding this to my favorites. |
 Delcat 2005-01-01 . chapter 1I'm sorry, but I can't even begin to review this, I can only beg you to keep writing. |
 NO ONE MUST KNOW 2004-12-30 . chapter 1Holy crap.
Was that disgusting? Yes. Unsettling? Yes. And it was quite possibly the best peice of writing I've read in ages, fanfiction or no - this was absolutely incredible, so intense, involving; the descriptions and figures of speech used were amazing. I don't even know what to say. I absolutely adore the portrayal of Walter, and even though the 'oh, it's just a dream!' ending usually gets to me, it fits in perfectly with the atmosphere and since we all know what manic madness is about to break out in that room. Amazing. Feel the wrath of my stalky prowess. |
 Elendraug 2004-11-14 . chapter 1My god, that's so beautifully ** up. Excellent work. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
 kinneas 2004-11-14 . chapter 1Oh my god.
I do not know who you are, but you wrote this for me. For me and only me.
I don't know if it's my nature affinity towards Henry, my love of psychological horror, my empathy, your glorious writing style, or anything... But I have never been so singularly affected by a piece of writing in my entire life. I am hot and bothered, flushed, the blood is rising to my face, I am terrified and overjoyed at the same time and I cannot breathe to save my life.
I will not be the same for days. My nerves are shot, and there is no way I can even THINK about technical criticism right now.
I still cannot breathe, and my stomach is turning with a weird mix of bloody horror, lust, anticipation, nervousness, and sheer happiness.
Thank you. So much. I needed that. |
 Lt. Gaydar 2004-11-13 . chapter 1Wow! I'm so happy, I love this, yes, like I said before and I can't stop, you are an idol to me and your talent is..just...wow. You left me breathless and you know how to satisfy my cravings for a great SH fics. You are...God itself. O_O Oh and thank you for the reveiw, it means alot. :)
Rammstein kicks major butt. You are a life savor.
Mein Teil is agreat song, also the vid is too. ! Wo! |