| Reviews for Archie post 911 |
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Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 1 This is so Archie I was so sad when Edith died |
wrestlefan4 8/1/08 . chapter 1This is really good and the characters are right on :) |
Alex B. Goode 9/16/07 . chapter 1Modernize the house a bit as well. |
DitzyLOL 1/31/07 . chapter 1 AWESOME! I love it! PUH-LEAZE UPDATE! Brilliant! |
benbrattlover 7/18/06 . chapter 1WONDERFUL! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! This story is FABULOUS! It's exactly like the way that "All in the Family" really is/was, and could really be like an actual episode! It's funny, until very recently, I didn't like the show, "All in the Family". In fact I HATED it. Then one day, I was channel-surfing and I came across a rerun on TVLand, and since there was nothing else on, I kept it on in the background while I worked on the computer, and I started watching it and thought it was HILARIOUS. Since then, I kind of like it. I don't go out of my way to watch it, and to the contrary, most of the time when its on, it there's something else I want to see, I surf past it, but I do think its pretty funny at times. I LOVE this story and CAN'T WAIT to read the next chapter! Please, PLEASE update soon! I am so excited to read what happene next! This is a GREAT story! All the dialogue is excellent. It sounds EXACTLY like it came out of the (late) Carroll O'Connor's mouth! PERFECT! I LOVE this fanfic! Keep up the good work! Please update soon! MORE! MORE! MORE! |
Susan 3/2/06 . chapter 1 Great dialogue and description of behaviors, would makea good TV episode. I agree with the others, You are a gifted comedy writer. |
MeoW03 2/27/06 . chapter 1Darn good work. I love it. Archie was so ignorant but funny about it. Did you ever do one about the acutal 9/11 incident. Id so love to see Archies take. |
x.Irish.o.Eyes.x 1/3/06 . chapter 1A very good first chapter! You have definitely captured each of the characters perfectly. I could picture it all in my head, it was like I was watching an episode right there! I look forward to reading the next chapter D |
WhiteTiger3944 12/28/05 . chapter 1love it so far |
Freebird87 12/19/05 . chapter 1This story is awesome. Sounds just like how the show would be if it took place today. |
The Reviewer 11/26/05 . chapter 1 OMG this is the finest piece of comedic writing I have ever read in fanfic. Are you a professional writer? because you really should consider it. The characters are all wonderfully portrayed, and hold true to who they were in the 70's sitcom. This really could be a wonderful remake on the original show, with a modern twist. Please keep writing I look forward to reading more. |
Jemascola 10/31/05 . chapter 1OMG, I couldn't stop laughing when I read this. The characters are perfectly within character, and I can just picture this being an AITF episode. The things they said sounded just what you'd expect them to say. I liked the parts when Archie referred to the terrorists as "alkaydees" and when Edith acted stupid and ignorant as usual, "aw dat ain't nice". LOL LOL LOL |
Macri007 10/29/05 . chapter 1cool please add more |
Dibsthe1 10/2/05 . chapter 1Archie and the gang ala today. I'm sure my neighbors could hear me when I read the part where Edith said "dat ain't nice..." and when I got to the part about "Thou shalt not cast your stones before God" I just about sprayed OJ all over the computer and myself. It's been almost a year since you wrote this, so would it be optimistic of me to put this on my story alert list? |
walkatdog 9/1/05 . chapter 1I agree with everyone else that the characters are well-written and accurate. Only one small issue bothers me. In the series, every episode had a theme relating to one issue or to a related group of issues. Your work jumps all over the board. If you could show a common thread running between the issues it would put my mind at ease. Please update! |