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Alex B. Goode
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseModernize the house a bit as well.
DitzyLOL
2007-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseAWESOME!! I love it! PUH-LEAZE UPDATE!! Brilliant!
benbrattlover
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseWONDERFUL! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!

This story is FABULOUS! It's exactly like the way that "All in the Family" really is/was, and could really be like an actual episode!

It's funny, until very recently, I didn't like the show, "All in the Family". In fact I HATED it. Then one day, I was channel-surfing and I came across a rerun on TVLand, and since there was nothing else on, I kept it on in the background while I worked on the computer, and I started watching it and thought it was HILARIOUS.

Since then, I kind of like it. I don't go out of my way to watch it, and to the contrary, most of the time when its on, it there's something else I want to see, I surf past it, but I do think its pretty funny at times.

I LOVE this story and CAN'T WAIT to read the next chapter! Please, PLEASE update soon! I am so excited to read what happene next!!

This is a GREAT story! All the dialogue is excellent. It sounds EXACTLY like it came out of the (late) Carroll O'Connor's mouth! PERFECT!!

I LOVE this fanfic! Keep up the good work! Please update soon!

MORE! MORE! MORE!
Susan
2006-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat dialogue and description of behaviors, would makea good TV episode. I agree with the others, You are a gifted comedy writer.
MeoW03
2006-02-27
ch 1,
abuseDarn good work. I love it. Archie was so ignorant but funny about it. Did you ever do one about the acutal 9/11 incident. Id so love to see Archies take.
x.Irish.o.Eyes.x
2006-01-03
ch 1,
abuseA very good first chapter! You have definitely captured each of the characters perfectly. I could picture it all in my head, it was like I was watching an episode right there! I look forward to reading the next chapter =D
WhiteTiger3944
2005-12-28
ch 1,
abuselove it so far
needles
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abuseThis story is awesome. Sounds just like how the show would be if it took place today.
The Reviewer
2005-11-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG this is the finest piece of comedic writing I have ever read in fanfic. Are you a professional writer? because you really should consider it. The characters are all wonderfully portrayed, and hold true to who they were in the 70's sitcom. This really could be a wonderful remake on the original show, with a modern twist. Please keep writing I look forward to reading more.
Jemascola
2005-10-31
ch 1,
abuseOMG, I couldn't stop laughing when I read this. The characters are perfectly within character, and I can just picture this being an AITF episode. The things they said sounded just what you'd expect them to say. I liked the parts when Archie referred to the terrorists as "alkaydees" and when Edith acted stupid and ignorant as usual, "aw dat ain't nice". LOL LOL LOL
Macri007
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abusecool please add more
Dibsthe1
2005-10-02
ch 1,
abuseArchie and the gang ala today.

I'm sure my neighbors could hear me when I read the part where Edith said "dat ain't nice..." and when I got to the part about "Thou shalt not cast your stones before God" I just about sprayed OJ all over the computer and myself.

It's been almost a year since you wrote this, so would it be optimistic of me to put this on my story alert list?
walkatdog
2005-09-01
ch 1,
abuseI agree with everyone else that the characters are well-written and accurate. Only one small issue bothers me. In the series, every episode had a theme relating to one issue or to a related group of issues. Your work jumps all over the board. If you could show a common thread running between the issues it would put my mind at ease. Please update!
Dragonjewel24
2005-07-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is really funny and really well written! You portray the characters really well. Its just like an episode of the show! update fast!
Khrissa
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abuseHey, thanks for reviewing for me lately. I dont know if I have your email anymore, so mail me, would ya? I miss ya.
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