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| Alex B. Goode 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseModernize the house a bit as well. |
| DitzyLOL 2007-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME!! I love it! PUH-LEAZE UPDATE!! Brilliant! |
| benbrattlover 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWONDERFUL! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! This story is FABULOUS! It's exactly like the way that "All in the Family" really is/was, and could really be like an actual episode! It's funny, until very recently, I didn't like the show, "All in the Family". In fact I HATED it. Then one day, I was channel-surfing and I came across a rerun on TVLand, and since there was nothing else on, I kept it on in the background while I worked on the computer, and I started watching it and thought it was HILARIOUS. Since then, I kind of like it. I don't go out of my way to watch it, and to the contrary, most of the time when its on, it there's something else I want to see, I surf past it, but I do think its pretty funny at times. I LOVE this story and CAN'T WAIT to read the next chapter! Please, PLEASE update soon! I am so excited to read what happene next!! This is a GREAT story! All the dialogue is excellent. It sounds EXACTLY like it came out of the (late) Carroll O'Connor's mouth! PERFECT!! I LOVE this fanfic! Keep up the good work! Please update soon! MORE! MORE! MORE! |
| Susan 2006-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat dialogue and description of behaviors, would makea good TV episode. I agree with the others, You are a gifted comedy writer. |
| MeoW03 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseDarn good work. I love it. Archie was so ignorant but funny about it. Did you ever do one about the acutal 9/11 incident. Id so love to see Archies take. |
| x.Irish.o.Eyes.x 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseA very good first chapter! You have definitely captured each of the characters perfectly. I could picture it all in my head, it was like I was watching an episode right there! I look forward to reading the next chapter =D |
| WhiteTiger3944 2005-12-28 ch 1, | abuselove it so far |
| needles 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis story is awesome. Sounds just like how the show would be if it took place today. |
| The Reviewer 2005-11-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG this is the finest piece of comedic writing I have ever read in fanfic. Are you a professional writer? because you really should consider it. The characters are all wonderfully portrayed, and hold true to who they were in the 70's sitcom. This really could be a wonderful remake on the original show, with a modern twist. Please keep writing I look forward to reading more. |
| Jemascola 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOMG, I couldn't stop laughing when I read this. The characters are perfectly within character, and I can just picture this being an AITF episode. The things they said sounded just what you'd expect them to say. I liked the parts when Archie referred to the terrorists as "alkaydees" and when Edith acted stupid and ignorant as usual, "aw dat ain't nice". LOL LOL LOL |
| Macri007 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abusecool please add more |
| Dibsthe1 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseArchie and the gang ala today. I'm sure my neighbors could hear me when I read the part where Edith said "dat ain't nice..." and when I got to the part about "Thou shalt not cast your stones before God" I just about sprayed OJ all over the computer and myself. It's been almost a year since you wrote this, so would it be optimistic of me to put this on my story alert list? |
| walkatdog 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI agree with everyone else that the characters are well-written and accurate. Only one small issue bothers me. In the series, every episode had a theme relating to one issue or to a related group of issues. Your work jumps all over the board. If you could show a common thread running between the issues it would put my mind at ease. Please update! |
| Dragonjewel24 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is really funny and really well written! You portray the characters really well. Its just like an episode of the show! update fast! |
| Khrissa 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHey, thanks for reviewing for me lately. I dont know if I have your email anymore, so mail me, would ya? I miss ya. |