Good story, very interesting. I normally read adventures but this is most certainly one I'll keep on reading!

hi! i really like the story... are you going to add another chapter?

You're quite welcome, and if you keep things up like this I'll be reviewing the story through! Well done, though it moves a little fast for my tastes. Still, that's just a personal taste--I get yelled at for making some of my stuff move too slow (but I have problems with pacing, so my stories move like a bloody yo-yo... *grin*). I'll be on the lookout for more!

Whoa. That was fast :)
But I like the way she did it. I suppose I would want Jack to teach me too. Oh, now that;s a nice thought :)
Good job, and yes, I do love the Don Juan reference.

Great chapter. Update soon.

It's excellent so far. The story flows, the visuals are wonderful, the tone and atmosphere are correct and you have captured the Jack character perfectly. Even to him mentally gulping when the delicate little shy flower turns bold. Everything is here, Jack, danger, Jack, intrigue, Jack, oh, and a girl of course, ah well, when jack is preoccupied with her I can jump him.

Why has no one reviewed this yet? Maybe it's not been up for long enough... after all, it was only yesterday...
Well, they'd better get cracking, because this is an intriguing beginning--I'm hooked!

I am loving Sin (also the name!). Doesn't sound like a mary sue to me. I too think she would make a great pirate and can't wait till she becomes that pirate wench.

This is quite interesting. Don't think I've ever read one quite like this beofre. I really do like it so far.