I know this is old, but I thought it deserved a nice note of recognition, anyway.

Very nice, I must say.

_ Not bad at all. I like.

AIya! don;t be so hard on yourself it nis very good thiugh the words don;t match much

that is a great poem! chrono trigger is one of my fave games... you should write one about magnus/janus! yeah! that would rock. good job

Kimmie

O, that was so good! I love Chrono Trigger (as though you couldn't tell by my penname, lol). I hope you write more poetry.

I really like it Indigo

Neat poem. It is realy inspiering! Makes me want to play Chrono Triger. Make more stories!

Great job! You should really write more poetry! You have a gift (i for one cannot write poetry worhth a hoot) so you should embrace it and do oodles more! _

Fairly good. Grade School review is

B OR A-

Pretty good, for a first try at poetry. I should write some fan-poetry...most of my stuff has been lost over the years. ;_;

the nicest thing i can say about that is that it was awful.

I'm new here in the CT section... But I have my story posted up. Nice job!

Preety good.

This was really, really nice. Good rhyming, too, something that's hard to pull off without sounding cliche, so my humble congrats, there. I love the line 'Then one by one they fall' Put a real, solid image in my head, and has lots of emotion.