I'm Back. And I'm angry. Why am I angry? BECAUSE YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED YET! I KNOW YOU PROBABLY THINK I'M BEING MEAN, BUT I DO THIS TO EVERYBODY WHO TAKES FOREVER TO UPDATE! I DON'T REALLY HAVE TO YELL LIKE THIS SO... I won't yell. Update, or feel my WRATH... Umm, hold up... I have no wrath... ANYWHO... I like your story so far, but you're taking too long to update. UPDATE! sorry, yelling again.

[Romantic music plays] Aw. [sniffle] First love is so beautiful. Please continue. There's a question I have to know. It'll help me know the answer and might give you an idea for the seventh chapter if you're stumped. Okay, here's the question: Since Lenny's getting home late, what's he going to tell everybody when he gets there? Please continue! By the way, I'm new here [just got here yesterday] and I don't how to get a story online. How do you get a story online?

Its shaping up to be a good story so far, you've really captured the characters and the small details that make Shark Tale so fun :3 Keep it up!

Hey. Sorry my reviewing has all but dropped off

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I really liked that chapter! course I like the whole story as you alreay know )

Oh, and I absolutely loved your cast choice for Melody!

Great! Keep it up!

Hello, I'm mrs stengel and am new to the site. I am also writing a simpsons story about Moe finding love. So I like the story so far. Maybe you can put the lyrics to "For once in my life" by Stevie Wonder at the end of the goes like this.

"For Once In My Life I Have Someone Who Needs Me,

Someone I've Needed So Long,

For Once Unafraid,

I Can Go Where They'd Miss Me,

For Once I Can Touch,

What My Heart Used To Dream of,

Those are the first few lines.

Signed Mrs Stengel

Yay update! Ooh, hinting last line ) aww, poor Oscar, first marital fight and poor Lenny thinking no body likes him, but if I read the hinting line correctly, someone's going to change his mind about that, aren't they ) Update!

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what comes next! I'm all a tingle!

I loved Frankie, too. I felt like crying when Lenny kept blaming himself for what happened! Poor guy...

I have a ST fic coming here too pretty quick. It talks alot about Frankie, but he might make an appearance in both a flash back AND a prologue! Swet...

And to anyone who thinks Lenny is gay, I swear I will come after you and beat you senseless with a very heavy blunt object.

Anywayz...Great story! Keep writing!

Aww, poor Lenny, I just wanna hug him now! I do love the show Boy Meets World, but have never seen that episode, although now I really want to!

and, oh yeah, I caught on really quick from the movie that Frankie wasn't a bad brother, he just had problems with Lenny annoying him. I mean, he did stand up for him and try to say that he would just run the buisiness after Lenny let all the cute, little adorable shrimpies loose.

Anyway, continue! and I hope your project goes well.

HELL YEAH WRITE MORE!

BTW frankies dead. did u resurrect him or something?

I have to agree with Forever Young...Punishment is in order! But that's really up to you...this being your story and all.

Anywayz, I think you should keep going with this one...I LOVE Lenny! He's the most adorable shark ever!

I have a fic about him too...it's a love story.(Oh...)But mines a little different.

I hope you get a chance to check it out!

waw, first fic of 'Shark Tale' that I see here,

*hugs you* thank you so much! I've been looking everywhere for a fic about it!

and yeah,I'm writing one too,it's about Lenny and a charcter of mine...

?: you're not intruducing me yet, huh?

shut up,(censored charcter's name), you see *turns to the author* it's gonna be reaveled in the story I'm writing, so see ya!

Yay, another Shark Tale story! Oh, why do I sense this is going to turn into a West Side Storyish plot?

Uh oh, the others are heading out towards Benjamin to take matters into their own fins? Doesn't disreguarding their boss' orders count as treason or something? Oh well, maybe not within a mob, who knows.

Anyway, I love! continue! please )