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Just Lovely 9/11/11 . chapter 1
I like the consistency of Neji's hatred for Tenten's dress, it added that little bit of humor to the situation along with the seriousness with how their client was a good for nothing that they were paid to protect.

The situation was good, I think, especially with how it was told through Neji's perception of things. I love how easy it was to fit into his shoes and feel the jealousy and over-protectiveness and annoyance held in regard to the situation Tenten and Yomaru were in.

It was very well-written and i love how you played off the dress.
Joanna Davis 8/16/11 . chapter 1
Very nice story. I likes the way you described the emotions! Very nice!
I.Deal.In.Dreams 7/7/11 . chapter 1
"I've always been right here in front of you, Neji." -Best. Line. Ever! That was such a beautiful story (like all of your stories, I might add). I love how you portrayed Neji's confusion and mixed-up feelings...so cute!
xBitterSweetDreamsx 2/6/11 . chapter 1
i really enjoy this story
Moonlight Music Mistress 11/6/10 . chapter 1
Ahh, I love this. I wish this would happen in the series. I'm sure it will someday. ;)
Marie 11/4/10 . chapter 1
That was adorable! Keep 'em coming please!
AB 9/17/10 . chapter 1
AW. I love fluff. Screw the mission!
Toph43 5/8/10 . chapter 1
omg..i wish i could do that to my man! or...crush more like it...
et cetera et cetera 11/4/09 . chapter 1
Oh I loved this!
lovedreamergrl 8/30/09 . chapter 1
very nice way of showing Neji's jealousy:D
Yunique 2/3/09 . chapter 1
Aw.I love it!
mangamaniacgurl 6/17/08 . chapter 1
It totally suits them both. Great job with the characters!
PrettyAmethystPrincess 4/19/08 . chapter 1
I liked it! very lusty, to me. Now, I'm going to read more of your storys!
xxguesswhoxx 4/13/08 . chapter 1
i hate that guy so much
Defender of the Light 2/5/08 . chapter 1
I swear...I'm going to have to go through and fave every single one of your Naruto stories. The emotion put into the characters is very well done and makes me feel what the character is feeling. It's very difficult to find stories that do that. Amazing work!
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