 Just Lovely 9/11/11 . chapter 1I like the consistency of Neji's hatred for Tenten's dress, it added that little bit of humor to the situation along with the seriousness with how their client was a good for nothing that they were paid to protect.
The situation was good, I think, especially with how it was told through Neji's perception of things. I love how easy it was to fit into his shoes and feel the jealousy and over-protectiveness and annoyance held in regard to the situation Tenten and Yomaru were in.
It was very well-written and i love how you played off the dress. |
 Joanna Davis 8/16/11 . chapter 1Very nice story. I likes the way you described the emotions! Very nice! |
 I.Deal.In.Dreams 7/7/11 . chapter 1"I've always been right here in front of you, Neji." -Best. Line. Ever! That was such a beautiful story (like all of your stories, I might add). I love how you portrayed Neji's confusion and mixed-up feelings...so cute! |
 xBitterSweetDreamsx 2/6/11 . chapter 1i really enjoy this story |
 Moonlight Music Mistress 11/6/10 . chapter 1Ahh, I love this. I wish this would happen in the series. I'm sure it will someday. ;) |
 Marie 11/4/10 . chapter 1 That was adorable! Keep 'em coming please! |
 AB 9/17/10 . chapter 1 AW. I love fluff. Screw the mission! |
 Toph43 5/8/10 . chapter 1omg..i wish i could do that to my man! or...crush more like it... |
 et cetera et cetera 11/4/09 . chapter 1Oh I loved this! |
 lovedreamergrl 8/30/09 . chapter 1very nice way of showing Neji's jealousy:D |
 Yunique 2/3/09 . chapter 1Aw.I love it! |
 mangamaniacgurl 6/17/08 . chapter 1It totally suits them both. Great job with the characters! |
 PrettyAmethystPrincess 4/19/08 . chapter 1I liked it! very lusty, to me. Now, I'm going to read more of your storys! |
 xxguesswhoxx 4/13/08 . chapter 1i hate that guy so much |
 Defender of the Light 2/5/08 . chapter 1I swear...I'm going to have to go through and fave every single one of your Naruto stories. The emotion put into the characters is very well done and makes me feel what the character is feeling. It's very difficult to find stories that do that. Amazing work! |