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Mand'alor
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
Wait does this fic take the killing zelos path?

Either way it's still uite a good fic, with a nice length, but i don't think i really like this version of yuan, Reliance had the best Yuan, as far as I've seen.

Looking forward to reading the whole thing.
Alaia Skyhawk
2008-04-28 . chapter 5
I've been watching this fic fr ages... Since before I joined FFnet in fact. Any chance at all that you'll continue this amazing fic that inspired in part my own ToS trilogy? (Puppy dog eyes)

I must say though 60k words in a single update... wowers.

Happy writing :D

Alaia Skyhawk
Magus
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
This is the second time I have read this story. It's good, but you have a tendency to switch from past to present tense, & it's really annoying.
Yokura
2007-01-03 . chapter 5
Wow... There are no words to describe your work. >.< THe story is absolutely perfect. XD But it seems like you haven't been around for a long time. x.x Are you going to update it eventually?
Epiclesis
2006-10-24 . chapter 5
for once i am happy that i took time to use the search engine to find this kick@ss story of yuan and kratos =)
words alone cannot describe what i have just read but this was just "amazing" i ususally find it odd for yuan to just disband the renegades and join kratos but this story was just so awsome in plot, in detail, and in bonds of friendship
yuan is my favorite character in symphonia along w/ kratos and a good fan fiction with them in it is just impossible to find (it's either w/ yuan making small appearances or them being seperated) and when they are together it always end up to be a "slash" pairing (which i understand and all but at the same time...i just sorta don't approve of it *shrugs* everyone's own opinion though)
i really want to see where this story goes and i pray that this won't be a discontinued one ever =)
keep up the great work and please never lose that writing spirit =)
Ruler of the Abyss
2006-03-28 . chapter 4
This story is really great. The style is very good, it is much to read and it´s a very interesting story.

I have only one thing to complain (Chapter 1-3, I haven´t read no.4 yet, but I wanted to review and was on chapter 4):
Don´t make Kratos that overpowered: He is good at front lines, he can high summon, he knows everything and he has the most powerful spells. That´s not really good.
Make Yuan a fighter that can be compared to that and not being that of a fool.
I think Yuans magic should be a little more powerful and his melee attacks are just about the same level, but he cannont summon and heal.

Than the story would be perfect! Apart from that: Great job!
Mentle
2006-02-21 . chapter 5
Wow! That was such a long and good chapter! I cannot wait for the next one!

Kratos sings? Well I can picture it, I like the idea to! I wonder why Sekundes is contacting Lloyd...? Hmm sounds like somethign bad is going to happen, can't wait to find out!

Hope you update with another wonderfully long chapter sometime in the near future!
Kitsune Prowler
2006-02-20 . chapter 5
Wow. Awesome chapter, but really long...
darkdragon
2006-02-16 . chapter 3
hey this is really good but can you continue please? plzplzplzplzplz? i must know what happens next!
Audinale55
2005-12-28 . chapter 4
So cool!*adds to story alert* I'm waiting!
victoria chu
2005-11-20 . chapter 4
like omg these r long chapters but they're really gd! but please try to update soon.
GyppyGirl2021
2005-08-23 . chapter 4
Wow... this is the most amazing fanfic I've ever read! Good job! *applause* I sure hope you can continue this fanfic. I love the nice long chapters, the storyline, the writing style... it's all too good! *more applause*
Shirora-chan
2005-08-21 . chapter 4
This ficcy is getting better and better! how olong is a while... I really cant wait! I really really relaly wanna see kratos make a pact with Sekundes! and origin and maxwell and all the rest of the summon sprirts! I REALLY cant wait !
Mithos Yggdrassill
2005-08-20 . chapter 4
This is the best fanfiction of its genre at Possibly the best of the website! This story is so good that I think you should publish it when you finish it. I will buy it. It's okay if it takes a while to write chapter five, for every chapter is good, and the wait is worth it every time I read this story. Thank you for this story. I will most definetly keep on reading it!
Hikari
2005-08-19 . chapter 4
I LOVE this story! You have got to update more. I work up this morning feeling pretty lousy then when I saw that Angels of Cruxis had been updated I was jumping up and down I was so happy! Literaly. My sister thought I was crazy! ^_^

I absolutely ADORE this story! And I love the relationship between Kratos and Yuan I always pictured them as good friends and you make it work so well in this story, keep it up!

This chapter was really good, some of it I just found plain funny, like the 'bazillion dots on the radar' thing and when Kratos, Yuan, and Keele meet up with the others Keele wants to be introduced while they're fighting a dragon, and I could just SEE Kratos getting mad at Lloyd, Colette, and Genis for fusing over Raine when he just said he was going to heal her. Priceless! And when Raine presses the button on the wall that was good too.

Plus you showed why Volt doesn't trust people anymore, so it dips back into the Ancient War and involves it more.

And at the end with Kratos and Yuan and the 'Best Friends Forever' thing, I LOVED IT!

Now I have to shut up and get off the internet or else I'd say alot more.Keep up the good work and update soon, PUHLEASE! I'm begging you!
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