we should all be embrasing this ** homosexuality not flaming that's my job YOU SUCK

The last line was priceless. Poor Yuki's name got very screwed up, I'm amazing it transitioned to Dom so easily! I truly hope it WAS something in his drink though...

Poor Neal. didn't expect that last bit. Not really a fan of sash, but still funny.

Poor Neal. He has major issues.

xD Funny. Not that I particularly like slash, nor those pairings, but it's very humorous and well-written.

Maybe next time Nealan of Queenscove could keep track of who he loves and doesn't? -coughnealyukicough- =]

hehe! cool! sorry I don't feel like giving advice or anything, I just want you to know I liked this.

squee! *snort*
fantashtical, oh yesh. made me grin like crazy person. lurvely ;)

AH *runs away* INCEST!

hahahahahahahahahaHA! Oh my God, that's hilarious.

"I love...Dom?"

*giggles* I can just imagine Neal's incredulity.

His cousin, of all people! Tut, tut. Sort of incest, isn't it? Or I don't know. Incest is between siblings. So what would it be called between cousins? *wonders*

The bits about Joren were pretty hilarious too. If these thoughts are undercurrents to Neal's true nature, then I'm afraid Yuki may be surprised sometime between their marriage when Neal goes through a midlife-crisis and runs off to lord over a harem of gay men.

Hahaha!--hilarious.

Hee! Love it! The train-of-thought is interesting and very well written. Awesome pairings, too!

-- jessalae

*snickers* Lovely. I don't particularly like Yuki, and this could quite easily fit with Neal's character.

very clever

*Laughs at flames* I am very envious.

Perhaps I should write more. (No, really? Lol.)

But that was hilarious. And sweet. xD

This was really funny, and well written, to boot. I don't really have anything to add - you did a great job. Thanks for sharing this!