Pretty good. You made a mistaje though: BJ didn't have a mustache when Frank was there. Other than that, it was good.

You know, it's scary that I don't find this confrusing

Yes, it was a bit confusing, but your story was also Very Suspensful! Okay, you so got to finish it. I have to know what happens, and what happened that changed radar!

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very glad you continued on this one.

excellent job.

No, not a confusing story, but one that feels incomplete. I would like to hear more of Radar and a possible cure, if you would write that... not ebcause alls tories should be happy, or all characters should have solutions to their problems, but because I hate war and don't want it to win, if you know what I mean? Thanks for this little twist, though...

Sam

Wow... this is a very unusual piece. It's more than a little confusing, but also really... brilliant. Excellent writing; I'm impressed.

Eh?

Chikory

brilliant story

truly brilliant

Emily

Im not sure I understand it, but what I do understand I like

mostly good... little confusing...

continuecontinuecontinue!

Oo I really like this story! Keep up the good writing!

*STARY*

nice start

confusing yes but its intriguing

Emily

wow!

Please continue i must find out what happens to radar!

great story i can see this going far

radar fan

'Twas very confusing, but it seemed more like it was meant to be confusing so as to be open to interpretation. I liked it. I'd like it to continue, if you please.

This is strangely intriguing. I don't find it confusing; I like it like this. You've got to continue! I'm really liking this; it's a great idea!

Jillian