Just so good. It's so good.

that was really cute! It's so sad that poor little May misses her Mummy... Good job XD

-Verity xoxo

incridibly great. the rhyming was good and May's characters here had been captured incridibly nice.

no compliment from me because the story was good already. thanks for the awesome read I had. keep writing!

AWW!That was so sad!It made me cry ;.; I feel so bad for May,without her mommy :(

This was write such good stories!

This was so touching! I really love your stories and peoms. You have a real gift for writing.

Well, see you next time!

kisa-chan-2006

Waah...sniffle.

that is so cute!

I love it!

that really reminds me of some families i know of... that is a touching poem

I REALLY like this. You have no idea how much it touched me. And that's alot coming from someone like me. I really like how it all ryhmes and each line fits in SO perfectly. It's been a while since I've read a good poem, I'm glad I checked this one out. I had to read it three times, I can't get enough of it! Lol.

Anyway, good work. D

Very very good. Creative and cute.

Oh me goodness... yet another of your wonderful stories that I forgot to review. This poem is awesome, not only are you a write... but a poet too... AWESOME! I love the rhyming scheme in this, it fits together wonderfully. i love it.

Touching. The rhythm was slightly off in some parts, but otherwise, this was really excellent. Poor May. (Darn her Mommy.)

oh wow...that's so...sad...and awesome...nice...

Aww... That's so sad... Poor May... *sniffle*

What a heartwrenching poem!

I like this.