I have to say... this was a very interesting fic! I honestly would expect a sequel but I can't put my hopes up. Got to read some more. Ta!

Good take on book 7. I must say you write very well and I enjoyed your story a lot! Looking back on it, I think the one constructive comment I would give is that the ending feels somewhat rushed. Sorry can't be more concrete. Congrats and hope to see more quality work! This is the 1st story of yours I've read but won't be the last. ;)

wow a changed killing curse... its a rather nice idea xD

mondy

expellation is not a word. EXPULSION, however, would qualify. nice story :)

whats with you and number titles? "the dirty dozen"? "the six"? lol

you really like bringing up the fact that harry and hermione are just friends, dont you? you did it in the shades of grey stories to lol

WHAT WHAT!?! lol well that was a vey long and involved prophecy. how did you come up withh that wording?brilliant...ly confusing lol

werewolves are not dark!
were a mixed group like humans, some dark some light.
and im dealing with them
good chappie otherwise
x!

That was one of the coolest stories I have ever read!

“Umm... Mrs. Weasley?” Harry said. “I need to go to muggle London, as well, and get some jeans and shirts and things...”
“Oh...” Molly looked concerned. “Harry, I don't know...”
“I'm sure that Remus would take me, I'd ask Tonks, but... well.”
“Yes. Remus and Tonks together in muggle London may not be the best...

Is Harry an adult or a child? Does he need Molly's permission to leave his own house? Does he have balls? Thank you, you have kept Molly as over-bearing and insufferable as she is in canon.

How do I find Milamber's C2 group. On his ffn page, it shows no C2s for him.

Harry should have cleared the air with some of DDs dirty laundry. The Old Fart always gets off too easily. He single-handedly, with no legal rights, dumped Harry on a doorstep belonging to the worst sort of muggles. He is a walking, talking testament to the fact the road to hell is paved with good intentions.

Oh my God, you almost make Molly a sympathetic person. I suppose she will be ooc and not the loud-mouth, bossy, condescending, smothering, mollycoddling ** she is in canon?
Oh yes, more story and less ANs. Story is too good to be buried under meaningless ANs.

Is the idea that Harry would care more for a girl who has been around a few times than a girl who was "untouched?"
I have never understood women and never will...

aw
at long last
snogs all round
Rose