* Stares wide eyed * ...Um...Wow. That ..what ..was AWESOME!
*Bouncing up and down* I totally loved the fic. Well, after I read it twice and finally kinda sorta got it. You'll have to forgive me I'm kinda hyper at the moment. But don't worry that doesn't usually affect my judgement. Anyway terrific fic.

Love,
None of your business

Interesting ... a bit odd ... but interesting. Almost, /almost/ made me cry, and I hardly never cry from fics. But this was just so ... sadly depressingly weird. But that's a good thing!

DIW

I can't find the words to describe how... how *deeply* this fic affected me. Anything I try to say to you in praise has probably already been said before, but... Oh man...

This is one of those stories where you're already tearing up by the end of the first sentence, screaming by the next, and then feling guilty at the last, for the lack of faith we had in you. You said no deathfic, but you can't really believe it until you're reading the last line and sobing your heart out.

This story gives so much hope, in the disguise of a dark, unsettling story. All the different ways the story was played out, all the intricate details of the relationships. By the end, you had me truly marveling at the delicate, but unbelievably strong conncections of brother to brother, lover to lover, friend to friend, human to human.

I'm rambling, but it's because this story just... it hits you hard in the heart, and even when you're finished reading it, you can't do much but sit back in your chair and just try and make sense of all the emotions running around in our hearts...

I'm going to be thinking about this story for a long while, thank you for such a beautiful tale.

wow, that was really well done

Phsychadelically awesome! Seriously, I love it. And I made sense of it, too. It makes good sense. I was a little confused at first, but I just had to read it all. Sweet...

O...My...God...you...you...VACATION?! Quatre wasn't even there! That's just...and the beggining was friggin confusing. And you made me cry! How dare you. *sniffles and loks away in mock anger* Well. I see how it is. That was interesting, to say the least.

I have to admit that parts of this almost made me cry. My friends and I RP as the Gundam Pilots. I was dubbed Trowa when I moved here and seeing all the points when Trowa killed himself got to me. Although I torture him a lot too.

Wow. Thats so amazing...the story was gripping. I couldn't stop reading it. Even after I had already read it once I had to re-read it. It's just so powerful...I really enjoyed it. Thank You.

Aww... Sweet... kinda... *laughs* love the ending.

Ah... a nice break from writing... and what a break!

The same, fantastic, succinct, controlled writing. It never ceases to amaze me by how readable your fictions are and how easily they flow from one moment to the next, never lingering yet building upon one another.

The idea was fantastic! Makes me wanna bawl, actually.. and I'm SO glad that at the end you didn't leave us with a new line of deaths to follow. I trusted you though! Hee hee. You said it wasn't a death fic, so I insisted to myself that I'd continue to the end. And I'm glad I did.

The tone of this one, the carryover of one to the next, I love how that bound everything together, Trowa to Duo... and how the concept of "brothers" carries far more than something of blood. That they are connected, each and every one of them, at some level, and in different intensities - yay!

Okay.. back to writing like a good little writer person. Thanks for the marvelous oneshot! It was just doggone perfect. :)

Ok, after I read the first paragraph, I thought you lied.I really wanted to curse at something. Then I realized the 'Groundhog Day' effect,I thought, how wonderfully querky. Dark, but not. Fantastic, beautifully written.

Excellent fic! This was well written and thoughtful. Too bad there aren't more stories of this quality on

Wow! That was so weird! I really liked it, though.

Well, that was different...

Intriguing...
Heart-breaking...
A little bit weird...

Cheers, anyway-- Rasha

Wow...now that's a twisted trip into the Twilight Zone if I've ever seen one. But really it was a nicely done one-shot. I like how you made it not just about the boys trying to get together but focused more on the relationship between Duo and Trowa. I loved how you presented many different scenarios of how they could be, from casual strangers, to brothers. Another great fict from the Manwell. *tips her hat to you* Very Nice.

Till then
Shadowgoddess