Reviews for Pure Innocence

Reviews For: Pure Innocence - Reviews: Page 1 of 8

SangorliaPotter 2007-06-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseit doesn't make any sense and it's poorly written, not to mention OOC.
Halliwell Outbursts 2006-02-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a great fic. it would be cool if u put some chris moments with his sis and cousins. please update soon...
Keirra_skys158 2005-09-03 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! This fic is AMAZING! Good job! I hope that you'll continue it!
PhoebeCole 2005-04-10 ch 10, anon.	abuseI JUST SAW THE 150th EPISODE! And then I saw your story on ChrisBIanca's thing and I was like YOU SHOULD ADD COLE IN SOMEHOW! I LOVE the pairing of ColePhoebe! Piper and Leo are still good though! Um...just wanted to say that becasue it looks like you have a writers block! I'm here to help anyone who is in need of ideas! Before I run out...Great story and keep up the great work!
LiL Witch Chick 2005-03-20 ch 9, anon.	abuseA simple stroke of Brilliance! If you update once a week then you could possibly get ALOT more reviews! Haha I know this becasue I used to have a fanfiction account, not on this site though, different one but I realize that the more you update and faster then the more people will be hooked to your stories. I think you should add a little more angst in here and maybe like more family moments. Like add in another dad besides Leo like I REALLY believe that Casie is Phoebe's and Cole's kid so liek add Cole! I can't believe htey killed him off...jsut like Chris...OR earlier you said that Kyle was still around! SO add him too! I like how you can handle both drama and humor with Oc's usually alot of authors can't handel all of it and that means a TROLL FIC I HATE those. Ok well I'd just like to voice out an opinion and all! And I can't read chapter 10 because my computer won't let me it should eventually though. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Jasmine 2005-03-18 ch 10, anon.	abuseGeez, you made me evil! I wouldn't make you do that if you almost died! Argh... and I am NOT that obsessive over manga!! I'm getting more artsy... Bleh, write more! Since I can't...
Krystal Knight 2005-03-16 ch 9, anon.	abuseO yeah! I forgot to add UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! The more you update and faster the more reviews you get! Have fun!
Krystal Knight 2005-03-16 ch 10, anon.	abuseWow...Psychotic... I like how you did the mother father bonding thing a little with Piper Emily and Leo!Very sweet! You should do it more often! I'm personally an Alias fan my self! Great show! I was like NOO When I found out that Sydney was gone for 2 years and Vaughn got married! They SO belong to together! I like Emily's outbrustS though! And Cassie's geeky anime comment! That was funny with the outbrusts from them! Well you asked for suggestions so I guess I'll have to give you some. One of them is you could explain what they're wearing and stuff like that. Be way more descriptive too! And ADD MORE CHRIS!! I'm DYING to know what he's up too! Same with Wyatt!! And More "family" moments! Yep...that's it !
The Magic Bringer 2005-03-16 ch 10,	abuseKeep it up
Ruby Rose 2005-03-13 ch 10, anon.	abuseGood job! Loved that Drama and humor and all! I wish you good luck on your future updates!
W.In.NtE.R 2005-03-13 ch 8, anon.	abuseFast UpDatES GreaT JoB! -WinTer
W.In.NtE.R 2005-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'd B MaD If I DIDn'T SeE reW toO! FUNNy ChAptER! I Like It AloT! -Winter
W.In.NtE.R 2005-03-13 ch 9, anon.	abusePOOR EmIlY! LikE hoW yoU caN MaiNTaiN HumOr And DraMa! I'Ve BEEm PaInTbAlLInG It Is SO MuCh FUN But It HurtS! You HAve GOttEn THe GamE WRittEn DOwN PrETTy ExAct! JASMinE And PEnLopE Are EviL! GuEss It RunS iN thE FamilY? -WinTer
W.In.NtE.R 2005-03-13 ch 10, anon.	abuseGreat JoB! I LoVE ThIS FiC! I PersoNNALy HAtE MaKE Up ToO!! ChRIs Is A HOTTIe GotTa LOvE HiM! I JuSt StaRted ReaDing so Be POrepare foR OthEr ReViewS FrOM ME DoN'T KiLL OfF PiPer! Kill PrUe InsteAd! ~WiNTeR
ChrisTinA 2005-03-13 ch 9, anon.	abuseo wow! SUSPENSE IS SO HIGH! PLEASE DON"T STOP WRITING!

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