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| MiaRose 156 2008-04-03 ch 21,  | abuseA nice story. An interesting take on everything. |
| syzygy13 2007-02-07 ch 21, | abuseNice. You know what I think? I think that it's a good way to end it. It was sad, and melancholy, but expected in a way. I also like that Rei holds a higher rank than Jason. Excellent. |
| jollygoauld 2007-02-01 ch 21, | abuseI loved this ending! Sad but hopeful... |
| BelovedOne 2007-01-19 ch 21, | abuseWow. Holy frickin' crap! That was amazing! Even though I am a hardcore SamJack 'shipper and believe that they should be together, the dark romantic side of me likes the idea of them dying together in battle. Good work - hope to see more good stuff from you soon! ~BelovedOne |
| Galaen 2006-10-08 ch 21, | abuseI really, really, really adored this story! It was amazing, even if it was incredibly annoying at some parts. I was frustrated at how realistically the life situations were. Things aren't perfect and stuff doesn't work out, sorry, deal with it. I'd especially love it if you could write a sequel...:hinthint: It's a great storyline and I'd hate for you to end it here since it's been left with such great potential. |
| Jax Solo 2006-09-22 ch 21, | abuse*sigh* OK, I guess that if SG-1 gets rebuilt with the kids, then I assume that it works. Excellent work. |
| Jax Solo 2006-09-22 ch 20, | abuseHOW COULD YOU?! YOU CRUEL LITTLE...WHY DID YOU KILL SAM AND JACK AT THE NEAR SAME TIME!! ARGH! I am very mad. I am going to keep reading, maybe it'll turn out that everything's all right...but I digress... |
| gatelover 2006-09-11 ch 21, | abuseExcellent ending Sad but great. There should be an epilogue and may be sequel, the next generation of sg1. Great Just Great |
| KateCayce 2006-09-10 ch 21, | abuseGreat ending! |
| Sandy 2006-09-10 ch 21, anon. | abuseWhoah that was a twisted ending!This was an awesome fic,i read it all in two sessions so i didn't really have to deal with any cliffhangers.It was just...well it was realy well written.The ending was wasy more believable than some happy Jack/Sam and the next generation Rei/Jason finally together sap.But i admit the sappish part of me wud've liked that.Still it was a kick-ass ending and the fact that Rei and Jason are together is lovely and tragic.At least Sam and Jack got to die together!sob!:(.Go you for writing something different!:)would def read one of ur fics again!:) |
| Black Rouge 2006-09-09 ch 21, | abuseSequel please |
| SGCFan4ever 2006-09-09 ch 21, | abuseExcellent chapter! Sad to see it end... |
| skiergal 2006-09-08 ch 21, | abuseIt wasn't how I would have chosen to end it, but I have to have Sam and Jack together...but I liked the dogtags scene, it kinda brought peace to the situation...very well written |
| scottiedog 2006-09-08 ch 21, | abuseThis story was excellent but sad! Thank you for writing this! |
| Arrant Schemata 2006-09-08 ch 21, | abuseHuh...that's not how I expected it to end. Not sure what I expected but I'm pretty sure it wasn't that. You did a great job with a tough situation. I may always wish Sam and Jaxk to be together but you did a fantastic job in making their lives apart believable. Well done. AS |