 sagelillias 2009-11-20 . chapter 13I know just how you feel. I have taken to substituting my favorite fan fiction in place of the last three books of the HP series. |
 Lord of Murder 2009-10-06 . chapter 4yay fluffalicious |
 PhoenixFireAshes 2009-08-28 . chapter 18For those that have not read the entire story yet:
SPOILER ALERT
Once again, congratulations on your great work. The story was Canon based, yet it was original enough to keep me on the edge of my seat. VERY nice move with Ravenclaws Staff. It makes sense regarding the Canon and was extremely original.
Congrats: The staff, obviously. The Honks moments were much better this time around.
Critiques: Soleiyu's problem is still driving me nuts, but thank you for completely shattering my theory of him being a vampire. I really hope you don't plan on making Tonks and Harry split halfway in, it would ruin it for me.
Up to you however. Good work, keep it up!
Phoenix |
 wokanshutaiduo 2009-08-26 . chapter 14First, it seemed more to me that Leon was a vampire than a werewolf. Actually it doesnt seem to make sense Leon being a werewolf... Anyway better keep reading II guess |
 omh666 2009-08-25 . chapter 18You messed up again. You have Harry telling his friends that he doesn't know how long he needs to stay at number 4, but in the last book right before he went there you had Dumbledor tell him that he'd need to be there for 3 weeks for the blood words to be at full strength after such a long time. |
 omh666 2009-08-25 . chapter 15Is he some type of shape shifter? That would allow him to choose when to become the wolf and when to stay in human form. |
 omh666 2009-08-25 . chapter 14You suck! I can't believe that you talk about him being a werewolf in so many author notes that I completely dismissed the idea. Although the eyes is how most people show a werewolf in human form so I guess I should have picked up on that when you pointed it out again in an author note. I was so hoping that he was a vampire. It would have made a lot of things a bit more interesting. |
 omh666 2009-08-25 . chapter 8I still say that he is a ** vampire. VAMMPIRRE! I guess I'll have to finish the story to find out if I'm right or not though. |
 Ryuus2 2009-08-17 . chapter 18I know what you mean every time you complain about going off track with your outline. That's why I don't use them I just have timelines crammed with events, factoids, and scenes lined out on paper. I have a large amount of trouble getting from point A, jotting down ideas, to point G, posting. I mean, it took me two YEARS to get out a Danny Phantom one shot, and I've started up a few dozen MUCH longer stories since then.
...Wait...why did I just put all of that uo there? I think I was going to try branching from there into an actual review of your stunning story, but I have absolutely no idea how I planned on doing that. Oh well, on to POA:R.
I look forward to more intriuging works from you. |
 jonez227 2009-08-05 . chapter 16i like your version of the fight with the basilisk more. i cracked up about your A/N "**-smiting" i love your stories to death |
 tipptoptim 2009-06-21 . chapter 14Cool Stories |
 OMG My Library's On Fire 2009-06-15 . chapter 14WTF! I Swore he was a Vampire! What else would taste like Blood! But BLOOD! Fantastic so far btw! Loving the stories! Kitty |
 sastath 2009-04-28 . chapter 14Haven't read ahead and haven't looked at the comments. I'm guessing he is a vampire, but not like a normal one. Kind of like Blade. A half breed.
I'm guessing the wold is Sirius. |
 sastath 2009-04-28 . chapter 12I got it. The Mexican Staring Frog of Southern Sri Lanka. |
 sastath 2009-04-27 . chapter 2Ah yes Harry being drawn to the Dark Side of the Force. |