 DrewMayShipper 2009-07-30 . chapter 10I'm such a sad person...jumping for joy when I read that Yami finally defeated Marik and his lying self xD I have to admit that Marik sure gave Yami a time of his life though when he plunged him into the world...and I'm starting to go crazy because I've started thinking that Isis just might ship Seto/Yami xD I was quite shocked about Mokuba when he first appeared before I slapped myself silly and realized that he was just acting like that because of Seto's little secret xD I adore how you write Mokuba <3 |
 MangaFreak15 2008-04-10 . chapter 10Ooh, I love Seto/Yami stories! |
 KyoxSakiFan 2007-08-04 . chapter 10I really enjoyed reading this story all the way through. I like your original plot, and it seemed realistic. I think its the best and most enjoyable Seto/Yami fic I have ever read. Great job! ^_^ |
 Swallows a lot 2007-06-05 . chapter 1me heart yami/kaiba.
great fic keep it up!:)
props 4-up! |
 KnotofRibbon 2006-06-30 . chapter 10*stares wide eyed* That ... Was amazing! I love this story so much! *hugs* You are so wonderful at writing! Can't wait for some new one's. *is currently taking all her time reading your stories* |
 Faery Goddyss 2006-06-21 . chapter 10Loved every bit of it! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-04-01 . chapter 10Sprung! I know its cruel, but I gasped a giggle when that happened!
Marik! You cruel *beep* *beep* *beep*! Let Seto regain his senses so he can help Yami! Don't leave Yami in the Dream World without Seto to help him!
Yeah! Yami's beaten the Dream World!
I'll be joining your C2, and I might make a fic of my own. |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 9Mokuba's smiling because he thinks that Seto's told Yami that he loves him, yet he hasn't!
Seto's finally going to tell him!
Ooh! First kiss, first kiss! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 8Stop teasing him Seto! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 7I think Yami is crying because he doesn't trust Yugi completely and Yugi doesn't trust him completely.
Go to Seto Yami, you know you won't feel better until you do.
Aahh! hehehe!
Ohh! He feel asleep! Ohh!
Mokuba's trying to get Seto to tell Yami he loves him! Ohh! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 6Because I acidently pressed the ENTER button while doing the Chapter 5 review, I put both Chapter 5 and 6 reviews here.
Chapter 5:
Ooh! Seto's getting closer! Ooh!
Mokuba's going to come into the room now and spoil this moment!
Chapter 6:
Mokuba! Don't slap Yami!
Has Jiichan died? Oh no!
Jiichans worse! It's better than him dying, but it's still bad!
Why in the world are Anzu and Jounouchi thinking like that at a time like this? |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 5Ooh! Seto's getting closer! Ooh! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 4Oh, Seto fell asleep. Oh, how cute! |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 3Seto would have gotten so much practise when Mokuba was younger.
I think Mokuba's starting to wonder if Seto likes Yami or not.
Anzu! How can you be thinking about that at a time like this? |
 FanFiction.net fan 2006-03-31 . chapter 2I like that. 'How could Kaiba be the one I “depended on” to keep me in reality? He was almost as bad as the Dream World...' Be grateful you don't have to go back there!
Does Kaiba type with his fingers on the keys their supposed to be on, such as your left middle finger on D, or deosn't he worry about that?
Poor Yami, how cute. Kaiba knew that Yami would be in that world when Mokuba shut the door so he camne to comfort him! Oh!
How come Mokuba's being so rude?
I don't mind the clingy Yami. He's scared and we've all acted that way when we were young. |