Your english is very good and so is your story. Please update soon!

ShamanLover

you need to finish this for me i can twait for stories and your more likely to get reviews for finished stories becsue people hate to be kept waiting so dont read them until they are and by then the writer is so depressed that no one is reding and reviewing he or she gives up and the story is never finished...Ops rambling again anyway nice story and like the way you keep us reading on wanting to see the rest of horos and rens memory that is sneaky i might use it to make my stories more captivavting! Rock-On!

Except for Chocolove's jokes, good fic. Update soon.

I wuv Horo Horo *huggles him*

Horo Horo: O.O

Aww. ^_^ How cute. I wish I knew spanish so I could read the original version. Oh well. Please continue. ^_^