 Halo Knight Zero 9/13/09 . chapter 14I saw bit of errors in here, not grammers or anything, its ok so far, its the cards, so unless you are going by the rules from the anime, Yugi shouldn't have played Monster Reborn from his hand during the battle phase a few chapters back and Red-Eyes Black Dragon attack is called, "Inferno Fire Blast." The "Flash Flare Blast" is the Red-Eyes Black METAL Dragon. Its not like criticizing, its just an advice that you check these things out correctly. I like the story so far, its very interesting, and the duels are ok.
ACCELERATION! |
 noodle-monster 12/12/08 . chapter 9well, at first i was pretty excited about the saber doll crossover. a few chapter into the story though it's abundantly clear that the crossovers don't mesh well. the dolls are physical do-it-yourself fighters, not silly wait-until-the-others-turn fighters. they've been reduced to little more than fangirls.
it was a good shot, but these two series just don't mix well. |
 cabrera1234 12/12/07 . chapter 1very good story |
 Ten-Faced Paladin 6/30/07 . chapter 19Poor yugi. HA ha ha! He's going to blow more than just a fuse! |
 ShadowDragonAmor 4/20/07 . chapter 6hfhfgkjhgfjtjfj |
 Nexus of Dark World 11/5/06 . chapter 1Nice story dj, i'm always loving this story, yugi yugi!His the best! |
 corey 4/20/06 . chapter 27 it was all good i really liked it |
 Nexus of Dark World 3/19/06 . chapter 2What would I do if I had the saber dolls with me? An interesting question. To be honest I'm not sure, as I tend to be a bit distant around most people, and I tend to get imbarrased by any sign of effection. I'd proberbly be like Yugi, though I'd flirt more.
But enough about that. Kudos with the story, Its awesome. |
 Nexus of Dark World 2/18/06 . chapter 11Oh dear gods the suspence! I must admit I feel both sorry and envious of little Yugi. One one hand his got the three busty beauties after him and on the other he has Rebecca and tea furious at him.
"Hell hath no fury like a womans scorn"
This is an exellent fanfict and I hope that you continue to write such awesome stories. |
 J.F.C 12/22/05 . chapter 1Great story so far, I hope you update soon |
 anon 12/21/05 . chapter 3 BUM BUM BUM BUM BUM |
 ness 12/17/05 . chapter 27 sequel NOW |
 ness 12/17/05 . chapter 25 HOLY CRAP:( |
 ness 12/17/05 . chapter 20 YAY Battle Royale of all time
WOOT:) |
 ness 12/17/05 . chapter 12 YAY Duelist Free-For-All jamboree!
WOOT:) |