 Private Ryan 6/8/05 . chapter 1 I found you. |
 squishyJH dont ask 1/30/04 . chapter 1 hi! well ya see...i dont have book 11...do u think u can post the stuff in the middle in davids POV?or e-mail it to me? |
 Finn Mac Cool 12/21/01 . chapter 1 Duck-K, I can't believe it took me so long to review your first fic. Let me just say, I have no doubt that David is your favorite character, but you sure like to torture him a lot. Still, maybe that's why you sympathize so well. I also like the fact that you set the story within the book (I have a tendency to find a spot in a book series that I like, then write a fic starting there that disregards future books). I think it may be up to you and me Duck-K, KEEP EVERWORLD ALIVE THROUGH FANFICTION! Ciao (got the spelling from your bio) for now-
Finn Mac Cool |
 Room304 8/28/01 . chapter 1Great story!
How about a conclusion?maybe some david/april story?that would be
cool.
By the way matchbox twenty rules!what CD was that on? |
 cheetagrl2002 6/22/01 . chapter 1I really really likeit good story! i have the third chapter and I am making more!so revei mine please! |
 AJ4 4/18/01 . chapter 1*sniff* so emotional! I love it! so sad! |
 ashley 3/28/01 . chapter 1 WOW. |
 QueenV 3/17/01 . chapter 1Hey. I kinda understand that story. Even though I've never even heard of Everworld. It was pretty good though. I'm gonna be such a nice person and reivew your story because you reviewed mine. Thanks again.
Oh and by the way, I've got a new chapter up on my story. Hehehehehehe, always promotting myself. |
 undefined 3/14/01 . chapter 1I guess it's pretty good. There's nothing too original in it, David's feelings for Senna have always been depicted that way. I loved the part when he dug his nails into his sides because it was 'just enough to pass out'. |