UPDATE! im a BIG fan of this story since...u first wrote it, but i changed my pen name and got a new account. so, umm...update? (even tho this is a bit a little late.)

OH, how cute! I can't wait to see what happens! One of my fav. stories is Peter Pan EXCEPT how Wendy leaves! YOU are a good writer and I can't wait till they meet again! UPdate soon!

ive said it many times but once more wont hurt...i love your stories. you truly have a gift for capturing romance and emotion. very few people can get the characters' feelings to jump off the page and seep down into the readers' sould...but there you go making my heart fly off to neverland with wendy...i just hope peter takes her back...

great

hey, kool ending I reckon. U know how u were looking for the original book: "peter pan" by J.M Barrie? Well, Christine has it...anyway...happy writing,

Yuffie Paine - YRP 4eva - Artemis Rocks!

great story!! kinda short tho.. well hopeya get the sequel in fast!!

aw i luv it plz plz plz hurry with the sequal -_-

Fun!

*starts crying* I hate seeing a story end. But this was beautiful. I'm glad you are making a sequel. ^_^

aww!!

keep updating!! dis was long enuf!! hurry up and rite more plez! ^^

er- okay... Wendy my be a bit free with her affection, but I like to think she's simply misguided.

VERY VERY VERy good chapter...but i am a little confuzzled on the whole James thingy but i'm sure your next chapter will explain it. Post your next chapter SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
~Shining Star of Valinor~

Quite sad... and depressing. But I'm sure you'll think of a way to lighten this up a bit! Good job.

carry on dammit!