yeah! that was so cool and love dark kai! and yes loved the pure innoence form the beginning! can't waot for the update and gotta say you don't disappoint when it comes to writing!

I realy like this fic, the sudden change in Kai was described really well and i can't wait until he gets Tala back at his side. Keep writing!

You better Im like totally dying from the excitement. (sp?) I dont know if your planning it but PLZ let it be some Kai/Tala like love in this fic. Im a huge fan of it. So hurry hurry hurry to put up chp 17. Dying here you know. X.X

Love Manda

please update !!
I think i'm gonna die if I can't read the end of the story !!
I can't wait for you're next update!

You will finish this story soon.
You will!
Meanwhile, I´m going to read all your other stories and try to find out if they are as great as this one. But even if they are, I want to read this story to the end. It´s very good, did I mention that?
So: You will finish this story - soon!

You will finidh this story soon. You will finish this story soon.

Or I will hunt you until the end of time and longer! *death glare*

Err... Back to reality: Nice sequel. I read "As the ice breaks" before and it was a cool story, but this have the possibility to top it.
Please, collect all your strenght, spirit and creative abilities and bring this story to an end. A great, unbelievable and (I'll be very disappointed if not) happy end.

The thought of a bad bitbeast as the mastermind behind all the dark plans is ... er... weird?... but I think I can cope with it - if the story only goes on and turns out well.

So, please write more.

Your respectful reader
Lyos ^^v

PS: Please forgive my grammar and spelling mistakes. English isn't my native Language.

oh i read the first story as well as this and u so have to update this story! it is so good! i felt so sorry for kai in the last chappie of the first story. i thought Tala was dead and all i could think of was poor poor kai! anyway plz update soon!

OH you left it in the best part! please update!! T.T

i love it! i would give you some ideas, but i have none right now. so sorry! it's getting really good. please update as soon as you have some more ideas. i cant wait.

Why does this always seem to happen to me?! I read it then all of a sudden it finishes WAY too close to the end, now you compare it to the hatch in Lost (strange how that turned out)!
Okay, now that I've finished my complaining, is Tala dead or something? I mean, he's Tala...but not. Is he being controlled or has something clicked, making him act like the Tala he was suppost to be? Anyway, please finish soon.

i honestly don't know what to say. I really like the story so far - still confused on the whole Sacha thing but anyways - but I will NOT give you ideas. You see, if a story has progressed this far [this story and the one before it] than I firmly believe that the author knows what they are doing. I can't give you advice at this point because i don't KNOW the characters like you do. Never mind Black Wolborg...

But here's something. Decide how you want the story to END. How will the characters end up? Alive, Dead, Coma, etc, you get the picture. Then work backwards. And when I say the characters, i mean all the characters, including the next to useless bus driver ^__~ it's always easier to plan a trip if you know where the destination is. Or in the immortal words of Lewis Carrol:

IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU'RE GOING, IT DOESN'T MATTER WHICH PATH YOU TAKE.

Whatever you end up with, I'll still love it. Be assured that you have one faithful and everloving fan! Bonne chance!

btw, Susi is finnish for 'Wolf'

Please update! I love your story and it is so good. I have read it about 5 times! Please add another chapter !

LOVED IT!
Really great story!

hmm... sorry I can't help your little writers block there, but I just so happy that you updated! even if they're, as I call them, merging chapters! again, happy that you updated!

~Retaro0

All right, I juat took the time to properly read though Chpater 15, because last time I did I was rushed.
So...I liked this update a lot, because it had things going on, and it also let our minds rest after all those intense updates.
I read that you said you needed help with the whole story; first thing I say don't go revamping and changing everything. It will all work for your plot. Hopefully.
Well, once they get to Boris' house, they all meet, right? You can spend a chapter having them all meeting up in his house, they can split into groups or something, and then you can decide whether or not you want them to meet Sacha right away or save that for later. I have some more thoughts which I will PM to you, along with thie previous idea in more detail.