 AnExiledFrank 2006-12-28 . chapter 1This is one where the the virtue made absolute sense. Really who else but Al have such blind faith that things would work out right in the end, that they would indeed find the Philospher's Stone, and faith in his brother. It's just so...right. I loved the flashbacks too, half dream, almost all memory (though perhaps that is how Al dreams, if he can truly dream at all, walking through memories) and just let it go. Course I might just be a sad sucker for chibiEd and chibiAl but at least I admit openly. Ish. And to sort of even out the part that wants to make you weep, but in a good way, like a cleansing break down, there is the bother bonding, that is trying to get Edward out of bed. Heh, one should never forget that, despite everything the two have gone through and will go through (someone bless fanwriters), they are brothers and like any siblings, they just know each too well. Perfect, perfect, perfect. |
 Hosaki 2004-11-14 . chapter 1^^ Excellent choice for faith. Then again, there isn't anyone else as qualified for Faith as Al is...maybe Ed... *sigh* I'm just confusing myself. Anyway, I loved it! Keep them coming, please! |