This was really, really good. Very well-written. I loved how you portrayed the whole Yusuke x Botan relationship. This is a really good read and I enjoyed it. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

Wow, this is very deep and beautifully written.

Wow...I'm going to cry now

I can so relate... I can't break away from the pretend world either... where life is 'perfect' and anything bad that happens is all in your control, being able to do anything... I'm addicted to pretend to and it scares me. Thanks though... I've passed tjis fic several times but felt scared of reading it for some reason. Now it all seems clear... thanks though. I've always loved your work. As for the thing about not wnating your friends to see what you've written I can relate to that too. But yeah... I'm boring you now. Excellent fix. Breath0taking.*faves*

Wow! I absolutely adore this fiction. It was incredibly poetic, and it didn't end with fluff and ponies and rainbows. I love how you portrayed 'perfection', and the imagery is profound. I don't review often, but when I do it is when I have found an astounding fiction. This is probably one of the few of the best fictions on Keep up the inspiring work- I am almost livid with impatience for your next work!

-Moe (kurama-sweethart)

How did you get so good? Your amazing and your work is incredible. I read your profile and I was wondering why you wouldn't want your real friends to read your work? I think it's incredible. Either way, I love how you word things, it really makes you think, makes you feel differently. Keep up the good work, in Inuyasha, YuYuHakusho, all of it. Great job.

O... *applaud* I love your fics, you know that? It all sounds so professional and stuff. Yeah, I know, giving a non-serious review to a serious-ish fic is kinda weird... Uh... I read the rating this time! *gets clonked*

Yeah, i think that your review did point out a lot of significant details about fantasy and reality, and it was well described. I like the idea that botan and yusuke are together, but the situation is rather bleak, cause i think that they would make one hilarious and loving couple, kinda like chi chi and goku in DBZ.

This one really hits home for me, because I'm a lot like Botan's characterization here, loving to play pretend, and daydreaming about what I would like to happen. It's a terrible thing, setting oneself up for disappointment.
Very sad, but also very beautiful. Or is it, perhaps, very sad and THEREFORE very beautiful? ;) Magnifique, mon ami.

Wow... this is the first review I've given anyone in the past year.

But I couldn't help it, I really loved this fic. Great job! It's wonderfully written. =)

Poor Botan! But -- well, honestly that's probably about as true to life as it gets, isn't it? Love isn't a glorified ideal and neither is sex, it's a shame that she had to face that so harshly, though.

Wow that was interesting. The make-believe and reality motif was a great idea. Nice work.

That was so deep... I forgot to blink and my eyes started to water... That was beautiful...