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Sir Stud Muffin
2009-05-30 . chapter 16
My first time reading a completed Toad story that I liked!
LOVE it!
- Cay
Bodo
2009-05-21 . chapter 16
I read Your story again :) It's so good :)
sessys girl forever
2009-04-07 . chapter 16
LOVE IT. a sequal would be gand you know
bodo
2008-11-18 . chapter 2
My girlfriend :D hahaha great nick name :D and great story!
<3
2008-03-15 . chapter 7
I love this chapter. It's just adorable. :D
<3
2008-03-13 . chapter 3
Dun dun dun. :DD
<3
2008-03-13 . chapter 2
All 4 elements? Unless there's extra limitations on her powers, that essentially makes her Pyro Ocean Petra Kristensen Aiero (and that's not even considering what she could do combining them)... I think if your character is as strong as 4 powerful canon mutants, it's a bit much. But, bahaha, I've thought of it too, admittedly. And paired her with Toad. I just didn't publish it. So I guess I can't complain. :D
<3
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
A nitpick- Scott's beams can't melt snow because they aren't hot. They're pure force. Any fire/explosions caused by his powers are due to him hitting something flammable or explosive.

Otherwise this is a totally awesome chapter. I love that they act together as a team, and how you introduce your character's powers by showing them in action rather than just telling us what they are. Very good for your first fanfic!
nightangelx18
2008-01-12 . chapter 16
Wow! This was an awesome story. It's hard to find a good Toad/OC story. I loved how you wrote this during the movie and changed it slightly to add what you needed to in order to establish a relationship between Toad and Damia. You wrote it very well. I loved how their relationship progressed throughout the story. I really loved the ending. Poor Dog now has to wait to be fed. LOL! :P
Raging Raven
2006-10-17 . chapter 16
Cute, lovable, exciting story.
Fyrefly
2006-07-18 . chapter 7
Wow. LOL. I like this one so far. Randomly: are you in high school? Because when I was in high school, I did the SAME thing--waking up at 5 am to get a chapter out before the day started. Unfortunately, I've taken down most of my fics now.

I don't usually review the fanfictions I read, but I like this one a lot. I enjoy your keeping with the movie plot, simply retconning the whole thing without introducing a lot of new changes. Familiar story, new faces. Your style is crisp and straightforward, I haven't noticed any spelling or grammatical errors (a huge feat for some of these writers), and you have just the right balance of mystery, romance, angst, and adventure. Furthermore--I just like the character. The title "Nymph" may be a little cheesy, but it fits, and this scene--with the cracks in the ceiling--actually made me laugh out loud. So inane and amusing, it really sets the tone of the character.

plus, it's something I would totally say when being held prisoner in a possibly life-or-death situation.

Ah, the amusement! Keep it up!
TheHollister
2006-05-12 . chapter 15
I've never read a Toad story before. This was brilliant!
MovieDorkShowSpork
2006-01-25 . chapter 16
Lmao, I love this! Good fanfic! I love in the end how the great dane whines, lol. I must say it's nice to see a toad/oc romance XD
Me&that small voice in my head
2005-12-06 . chapter 10
yea shes home. So the Prof knows wow. i think i say wow alot.I probuly wont review on most chaps cause i'll forget.sry.
Me&that small voice in my head
2005-12-06 . chapter 4
Wow i cant believe you only have that many reviews.i ment that in good way too.Anyways nice chapter.
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