thanks for sharing this story! the plot was quite predictable, but I loved how you characterised Tenten and Neji close to the canon. keep it up! :D

nice:)

Short and sweet. I like it. Well done.

Such a beautiful ending! :')

Aww...the kissing scene was so romantic! Luv!

Hehe! Neji is jealous! 3

That was sooo sweet:)

Tenten is the hero of the world!

That was beautiful:...) for a second I thought he was gonna say that he did this for her because they can't be together or something haha whew what a relief

They need to confess. But this was really sweet:)

Oh dang! The fight was awesome:) and Neji is by default haha

Mm hmm Neji you protect your woman haha

Ahh neji showing that he cares through the little things;)

I absolutely loved the ending, it was a sweet and nicely written resolve to the trouble they had gone through with the mission.

I liked the emphasis on how both Tenten and Neji have changed, growing and learning from this mission with the other by their sides, it's incredibly sweet.

Well done!

I really love the loyalty between Neji and Tenten, there's always more to add to them, always loyal and loving, patient and kind.

I love the excitement that you have thrilling through this chapter, the fights and the action made by each experienced ninja, it's very lively.

I really like how you showed Tenten's experience, all her acting and strategic plans in keeping Nanabi safe and going out of her way to tell Neji, despite being injured because she knew that he would be holding back. She's very admirable, and goes farther than any limit.

The quiet and sweet resolve in both parties is bittersweet, I really like how you've created the emotional atmosphere to show that.