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Reviews for: Fair Ravenclaw, From Glen
Madame Ergoth
2006-01-01 . chapter 1
I really like the story! Ravenclaw has always been my favorite house and I think that it is a very good idea to write a biography of Rowena Ravenclaw. Please write more! P.S. I also love your works on fictionpress!
Miss Annabelle
2005-06-29 . chapter 3
This is excellent. Do write more, please.
Beatrice H. Groos
2005-01-23 . chapter 3
For this you would have gone to a terrible amount of trouble in looking for the history of the time, unless you just have this knowledge in your head. And even if the information isn't true, I believe you anyway.
Update Soon!
Tabby Cats
2005-01-06 . chapter 3
This is a very interesting and well-written story - I'm glad I saw it! Rowena is an engaging child, and while clearly precocious, is written very nicely as a young, eight year old girl. I'm also curious about these two boys...I imagine she bumped into Salazar (if the boy was also one of the four, and not just a normal young wizarding boy), but would that mean that Arlice is training Godric already?

I hope you don't think me incredibly stupid, but what is a gunna? Is it like a blouse or an apron, or something else entirely?

The only other thing I noticed was that in the first chapter, you used 'exhale', when I think you meant 'exile'. One or two other times, your sentence structure confused me on the first read, but made sense the second time through. I really do like your style of writing, however - it's a very enjoyable read, and certainly has me wondering what's coming next!

Please update soon!
McGonagall's Cat
2005-01-06 . chapter 3
This is OUTSTANDING!

I read the first three chapters and am sad there isn't much, much more already written! PLEASE write more soon.

I'm loving the bits and bobs of history and such you are weaving into this (though occasionally there were places that seemed a tad anachronisitic/modern).

More please, very soon! Thank you.
Sunshine Spray
2005-01-05 . chapter 3
You've got a great story and I'm dying to know who that boy was. I have a hunch but I might be wrong.
Eltrut
2005-01-05 . chapter 3
Ohh...I like this. I'll be watching for your next chapter!
Woman of the Dunedain
2005-01-05 . chapter 1
What a great story! I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Troodon
2004-12-02 . chapter 2
Hey, hey! Great idea and story so far. I will definitely be looking out for more updates *coughs*. Like your title, by the way. Is it from one of the Sorting Hat's poems?
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