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| charmed-darkangel 2008-04-26 ch 22, | abuseCool!! Chris and Bianca deserve it!! |
| charmed-darkangel 2008-04-26 ch 23, | abuseLove the story!! IT's a whole knew idea.I read all of it now, i couldn't even stop reading. LOVE the part where u brought prue and andy. And also the part when KAT is the evilperson in the future. Looking forward tothe sequel |
| charmed-darkangel 2008-04-26 ch 9, | abuseLOved this chapter!! |
| Pinky Barbie 2006-02-03 ch 23, | abusethis was FAB hun ! :) |
| forever as in charmed 2006-02-02 ch 22, anon. | abusethat was so great. i loved it. that was the best story i read all week. please write another. good luck. bye |
| angdalton 2006-01-02 ch 23, | abuseIt was very, very, very good! Why nobody write so nice stories? I love happily ever after!! Thanks for this story. You have to write more stories. |
| TriGemini 2005-11-08 ch 22, | abuseThis story was totally awesome to read! Really enjoyed it. It had lots of twists and adding the whole part of about Phoebe and Cole's first child made it much more interesting, too. Not to mention, that Kat was definitely a great new character to, she added a lot of life to this story and somehow I'd say she was probably the one who was able to hold the entire story together. Seeing as much of the action and the situations were about her or at least, they surrounded her. I liked this last part especially, the way you summarized Chris future with Bianca was icing on the cake. Not to mention, it sounded as if everybody was happy now in this future than previously beforehand. Anyway, again this story was really enjoyable and it was a very happy ending. So congradulations on a great story. Very great indeed! |
| DarkHalliwell 2005-04-16 ch 23, | abuseI have to say... that was a very good story. it got a little confusing at times, but you cleared it up along the way. so... u probably wont read this review, but GREAT STORY! |
| C.Charmed24/7 2005-04-16 ch 22, anon. | abuseI loved that ending! It was the perfect ending to this wonderful story. I even cried a little! |
| C.Charmed24/7 2005-03-30 ch 21, anon. | abuseAwe! That was a great chapter! Loved it! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON |
| Booshaholic 2005-03-20 ch 20, | abusethis is brill! please keep going. i love the fact that cole is back because he is so cute! this is really good though, better than mine. |
| Mike 2005-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was a good story, even though i dont watch charmed or anything like that, lol, but yeah, it was awesomelyawesomeness |
| katbaby 2005-03-05 ch 19, | abusefound your story through search of Cole T. & Phoebe H. Loved the update; can't wait to see you how tie everything up. thanks! |
| hope master 2005-03-05 ch 19, | abusedude keep goin man |
| GothCatholic 2005-02-22 ch 17, | abusewoah i just read the last two chapters. wow |