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| Melchy 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWhat a nice story! No bad guys, or trouble or anything bad, just time spent with each other--a nice vacation. You write Jim and Pete very well, I could see the characters in your writing and you even gave Jean life--something that is hard to do when you see a character so little. Just one thing--a divider when you change between the guys and girls would have been nice, but not really necessary. Thanks for a good read. |
| DixieDavenport 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI see it's been awhile since this was posted BUT it's also been awhile since I shared a 'watch' with Jim and Pete! I was corrupted at ans early age by them as well as Johnny and Roy of Emergency! -- which can explain my job as a correctional officer, and Volunteer fire fighter while being sertified as an EMT!! Loved the soty Hope to see more. Joni |
| jd burns 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWow...well-written. I'm not that familiar with this series or the characters, but that wasn't a problem with me for this story. Really liked the scenes with the guys fishing especially. |
| Story Oracle 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering if you've changed your website address. I really like your stories, but I can't seem to get to your site. Could you give me the url to get there? Thanks! (sorry I had to put this is a review but i had no other way to contact you) |