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Reviews For: Off Duty Cops, On Duty Dads

Melchy
2007-04-03
ch 1,
abuseWhat a nice story! No bad guys, or trouble or anything bad, just time spent with each other--a nice vacation. You write Jim and Pete very well, I could see the characters in your writing and you even gave Jean life--something that is hard to do when you see a character so little.

Just one thing--a divider when you change between the guys and girls would have been nice, but not really necessary.

Thanks for a good read.
DixieDavenport
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI see it's been awhile since this was posted BUT it's also been awhile since I shared a 'watch' with Jim and Pete! I was corrupted at ans early age by them as well as Johnny and Roy of Emergency! -- which can explain my job as a correctional officer, and Volunteer fire fighter while being sertified as an EMT!! Loved the soty Hope to see more.

Joni
jd burns
2005-02-24
ch 1,
abuseWow...well-written.

I'm not that familiar with this series or the characters, but that wasn't a problem with me for this story.

Really liked the scenes with the guys fishing especially.
Story Oracle
2005-01-02
ch 1,
abuseI was wondering if you've changed your website address. I really like your stories, but I can't seem to get to your site. Could you give me the url to get there? Thanks!
(sorry I had to put this is a review but
i had no other way to contact you)
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