 Magic Ryu 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Wow. i've been looking for stories like this for years i don't know HOW i missed this one. Im favoriting you and alerting |
 Rasei 2008-10-14 . chapter 1To me the story was very deep. I like how Sasuke walks over to Naruto for a moment. |
 giganemo 2008-09-02 . chapter 1Aww! I like ^_^ |
 Wasabi-Cheddar 2008-01-21 . chapter 1 This was sweet & sad and well done. There may have been a couple of mistakes but nothing so major that I can think of it right now. I just have to keep reminding myself that your spelling isn't wrong it's just that Australian & American English are different.
There's no reason to blame this story on anything as I don't think you can be accused of doing anything wrong. Good job in trying something new. It's always good to extend yourself.
I like how you seem to bring something to nothing but I'll elaborate more on that when I review some of your other stories as I haven't quite figured out how to properly express myself. And probably never will but I'll give it a shot anyway.
So thanks for writing. I'm quite a picky person & a bit of a perfectionist but I have enjoyed your works immensely. |
 Black Sunflower 2007-12-27 . chapter 1OMG, this was so kyoot!!
It's fantastically good with a hint of bittersweet (I felt like crying at the end XD).
Rah! -shoots fist up in the air- Keep writing!! Good job!!
((Eh, this is probably my worst review yet, since it's about 1AM...))
~~Lynn
~BlackSunflower |
 ShiningCalvin 2007-10-07 . chapter 1KAWAII! oh, crap, this is my bro's profile... crap. I"M REALLY CALLIETITAN!! anywhosies... KAWAII!! SO KAWAII I COULD DIE! seriously, very well written. YOSH! nicely done. |
 midnightwaters 2007-07-19 . chapter 1Aw! So cute! |
 Kaira-chan15 2007-06-06 . chapter 1Another great friendship story! Amazing job, this is just as good as the other ones! I love the ending, too. ^_^ Btw, in your note, you were saying something about debating whether Naruto or Sasuke had the most tragic past. If you are interested, i wrote a short fanfiction debating that too, if you wouldn't mind checking it out. |
 MuppyPuppy 2006-12-02 . chapter 1good story... |
 Naveen!M 2006-10-02 . chapter 1 Spectrum,
Saw your link to this page from NarutoFan Forums. This is the first fanfic I've read on Naruto. I should say... stunning work. You brought out the emotional undertones of Naruto and Sasuke very well. Looking forward to read more of you work! Good work girl! :)
Suggestions/Comments: Switching back and forth between Naruto and Sasuke felt a lil tedious at some point. But then, if you are a hardcore Naruto fan, you wouldn't notice! :) And then, I doubt if Sasuke would've come and smiled at Naruto. Not him! :)
Anyway... other than me being picky, you've done a wonderful job! Keep it up!
Naveen!M |
 Moondrop Flower 2006-06-04 . chapter 1Beautiful...I love it!! And I read another story but I didn't reviewed...sorry about that XDu...but really, I love it! |
 ars nova 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Excellent |
 make-out-paradise091 2006-04-08 . chapter 1This was, to put it simply: Touching and Beautifully written. It moved me so much as i was reading.
Really I don't know what else to see but very few fic have moved me so much like this one and so i congratulate you. This fic really has sometimes and everything contained in it seems very...genuine..
Thanks for the good read. |
 Pepp 2006-03-05 . chapter 1 *sniffles* How sad! Its sweet, in the end though.. And I completely agree with the two not wanting to win a contest of who has the worse life... I admit, I haven't seen all the Naruto episodes, and I can't wait to see more episodes of Naruto and Sasuke as they are when they are younger, if they /do/ show more, that is... Their pasts interest me like no tomorrow! ^^ Another great story, and i give it 100%! ^^lol |
 arcdarling 2005-12-26 . chapter 1SO CUTE! |