Reviews for A Step Onto Chronos

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amimizunofan22 2008-06-27 ch 21,	abuseWeird...the forest already started sprouting. Was it actually in the game that the theory of parallel time periods came up, or did fans as a group come up with it? I'm talking about the fact that, just as a few minutes pass in one time period, for example, a few minutes pass in each of the other ones. Well, regardless, it's interesting to see how the other characters react to you and your self-discovery as Barog. Also, I enjoyed the reference to Robina Hood, even though I lost interest in Adventure Quest pretty quickly, and Lina Inverse. It might have been bad for nearby Porre if you had decided to solve things her way. I'm glad that you're keeping at the story and await the next installment of: in a dramatic voice A Step Onto Chronos!
ranma hibiki 2008-03-03 ch 20,	abusewow, good fic so far, will be interesting. though my personal opinion, could be 2 teams for the shell, one to clear an the other too start cleaning up the tomb while waiting to get the shell. now one team can go into the future an go thru while another stays in the past an fixes things up ...i wonder what magus an glenn will think of 'mother computer' hologram lady thing when robo goes on his quest for his most powerful arms xD
amimizunofan22 2008-01-20 ch 20,	abuseAh, the first fanfic I read on this entire website (and definitely in my top 5) has come back from the dead! :D Well, it was another great chapter! I like how you're developing the game world to fit reality (if such a thing is possible when you're talking about a fictional world) better. It's always fun to follow a game's progress in a fanfic, but it's even better when you expand the its world a bit. The cave expansion and the Tyrano's new armor are good examples. These and other instances flesh out the plotline a bit. Also, your presence in the team leads to some man-made (or otherwise-made...) modifications to the terrain. Overall, I just love the story! I find that it's neat to listen to the game's soundtrack while I read the story; it kind of enhances the experience, I think. Well, I hope that your writer's block becomes UNblocked and that your job hunting goes smoothly. Well, I'm done with this review; over and out!
amimizunofan22 2007-06-20 ch 19,	abuseI've enjoyed the ride so far. Yeah, I like Lucca, too. She kicks but with her fire spells and, well, she's nerdy (which by no means is a bad thing...I'm kinda nerdy/bookish myself). I like the development of Glenn's wind and Ayla's earth spells and the subtle deviations from the game's actual plot that are necessitated by your presence in the story. Nice work and I hope that you continute the story (it's on my alert list).
GuyverZero 2007-04-12 ch 19,	abusegood to see an up date to this fic, can't wait to read the next chap good luck with it man. GZ
GuyverZero 2007-01-17 ch 18,	abusegreat to see an update sorry it took so long to review been busy as hell, good luck with the next chapter looking foward to it. KnightX
Lord Tobies 2006-10-25 ch 15,	abuseOk man you asked for it so here's my offical review. "It is horrible, an insult to all authors ever exsisted. If you have any dignity you would quit writing to save us from your horrible work." Sorry man I had to rip on you no one else has, but in all seriousness. Like I said before not bad though your rushing the plot and leaving out character's reactions. In chapter 15 nice use of flashbacks but don't you think people would be maybe a little more worried about someone fainting every few minutes. Your writing has improved alot over the 17 chapter but it's still kinda gritty. Glad you used my suggedtion for quotes at the end of the chapters I think it add a nice touch, Just my opinion. You also need to start claiming Barog and CO. as your's mine and Frank's. Other then that you use conversational dialoge very well keep it up it seems to be your forte and I can't wait till my guest apperance.
GuyverZero 2006-09-04 ch 17,	abuseits great to see an update to this fic. good luck with the rest. KnightX
2006-06-19 ch 16, anon.	abuseLOVE THIS FIC!
GuyverZero 2006-06-14 ch 16,	abusedog this story is really getting good. CT is just one of the best rpgs around. good luck with the rest of this story. KnightX
angelofdarknessfire 2006-05-10 ch 1,	abuseupdate sooner
SmashQueen 2006-04-22 ch 15, anon.	abuseYay! Glenn doesn't have ye olde accent anymore! Love the story!
Angel of Atonement 2006-04-21 ch 15,	abuseThis plot is getting more complicated, that's for sure. Warp Kamehameha? Funny how he DID do drawings for Chrono Trigger AND DBZ... Well now I don't know if he's human or what. lol I'll look forward to more.
GuyverZero 2006-04-21 ch 15,	abuseman it's good to see the a new chapter in a great story. where did u come up with barog firestorm? that is pretty cool. ok can't wait for the next chapter. KnightX
Angel of Atonement 2006-04-18 ch 14,	abuseWhat to say, what to say? I want to tell you how good it is to read the story again. I want to gove some helpful critique. But I didn't notice anything bad standing out. And I'm too tired to give compliments right now. Nice work. Very touching, I suppose. XD

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